Halloween on the Pond

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pumpkinWarning: This a rather scary story, particularly if you are a very small tadpole. Halloween is the most frightening night the year, or it is the most scrummy night of the year, depending on whether you are on the right end of a trick or a treat. Prince Bertie the Frog, Colin the Carp and friends are in search of fun and things to eat, but they encouter a real wicked witch in the form of Princess Beatrice’s Stepmother. Bertie makes a wish, and then wishes that he hadn’t.

Read by Natasha. Duration 15 minutes.

It was the day before Halloween. Bertie and his friends were splashing around, just as they do on any ordinary day, but it wasn’t any ordinary day, and it certainly wasn’t going to be any ordinary sort of night. But for now, Sadie, was calmly admiring her reflection in the pond, and Colin the Carp was moaning about, well, just about anything and everything, so nothing out of the ordinary there. And Bertie and Tim the Tadpole were playing a game of Twenty Questions, except that it wasn’t going very well because the only thing that Bertie could think of was “skateboard” and the only vegetable that Tim could think of was “green slime”, which made it a bit easy.

As they were playing, Tim saw Princess Beatrice and the children from the palace collecting giant pumpkins from the vegetable patch.

“What are those very large things, Bertie?” said Tim.

“Those? They’re vegetables.”

“Oh. I didn’t know that vegetables were so scary!”

“Well, my tiny friend,” said Bertie. “That’s because they are meant to be scary. The children are going to hollow them out and put candles inside them so that they light up for Halloween and look exactly like horrid scary monsters.”

“Oh,” said Tim. “I’m rather frightened.” Because you see, Tim is only very small, even by the standard of Tadpoles, and he gets frightened rather easily. Just then, Colin the Carp, who is a very grumpy fish, snapped his teeth loudly behind Tim’s back, so loudly in fact, that Tim squeaked, “Yikes !” , and tumbled back into the pond with a tiny little splash.

“Huh!, Halloween’s a good time for scaring small and silly creatures,” growled Colin.

When Tim returned timidly to the surface, Bertie continued to explain all about Halloween:

“It’s the most brilliant time of the year. When I was a prince I used to go Trick or Treating. I would knock on doors and say, ‘Royal Trick or Treat”, and if people didn’t give me sweeties or chocolate, I would play a trick on them. But most people were a bit scared, and they gave me a treat. And so every Halloween I had the most yummy scrummy time. ”

“Fabulous !” cried little Tim. “Can we go trick or treating Bertie? I promise to be really, really scary, and people will give us loads of green slime and other delicious things.”

And so, Bertie decreed, that this year, the Pond Life would go Trick or Treating. Sadie, Bertie and Tim, thought long and hard about what sort of costumes they should wear. Then Tim had a brilliant idea, which is rather unusual for him.

“Why don’t we go as a swan, a frog, and a tadpole?” he said.

Sadie walked in front, and Tim hopped onto Bertie’s back, and they wandered through the vegetable patch, and started down the street. Sadie tapped on the doors with her beak, and by the end of the evening they had collected loads and loads of sweets. They had jelly babies, and toffies, and biscuits, and chewy things, and well, it’s making me a bit peckish just thinking about it. And when they had as much as Sadie could carry in her wings, and Bertie could stuff in his mouth, they decided to go back to the pond.  But as they drew close, a thick mist was hanging over the pond.   Three human beings were taking a walk through the dark.  But were they really human?  After all, it was Halloween.

“Oh !” said Tim,  ”What are those strange creatures?”Are they… are they scary monsters?”

“Well,” said Bertie. “I would say, based on my experience of magic and the supernatural, that, er, what we see there is a big witch and two baby witches.”

“o000000h!”

Suddenly one of the little witches called out:  ”Tick or Treat!”   and her friend said, “Trick or Treat!”  and at that very instant,  Colin the Carp leapt up out of the water with a dead fly in his mouth, and he put it right down in front of the tall figure who, as it turned out, was the Lovely Princess Beatrice who had dressed up as a witch for Halloween.

“Here’s your treat !” said Colin, “Now, Buzz off !”

Princess Beatrice, who as well as being very lovely and sweet, is also very afraid of creepy crawlies, and besides, had never heard a carp speak before, jumped up in the air and shrieked:

“Aaahhh ! Ahhhh!”

And she ran all the way back to the palace with the two little witches following her as fast as they could.

“Ha! That will teach her to come around here asking for treats,” grumped Colin.

“If only,” Bertie mused, “A real witch would come and put a spell on him.  What’s the use of all those pretend witches?”

Little did Bertie know, that just then, in front of the full moon, a wicked witch was flying past on her broom, and that the wicked witch was none other than Princess Beatrice’s step mother.   And since it had been rather a dull Halloween, and she hadn’t found anybody to turn into a frog or a toad,  she was delighted to hear Bertie calling for the services of a real grade A, official, and fully certified, Wicked Witch !

“Wooooosh!”

She went flying low over the surface of the pond, leaving a huge wake of surf and green slime.

“Yah, Ha HA HAAAA!”  she screeched.  ”Let those who moan, Turn to Stone!!!!!”

When she was gone, and all was quite again, little Tim said, “That was rather scary.”

“Nonsense,” said Bertie, “That wasn’t frightening at all.  I just hid behind this tree as a sensible precaution.”

And so the Pond Life went to bed.  And I’m glad to say that none of them had any nightmares at all.  But I’m sorry to say that Bertie felt just a little bit sick, as he had eaten so many scrummy sweeties.  But when the sun started to rise over the palace, and stretch her warm autumn rays over the pond,  Sadie the swan was admiring a new fountain that she hadn’t noticed before.

“My oh my,” she said, “That stone fish with water coming out of his mouth looks just like Colin.  I wonder who could have made it in his honour?”

“Yes,” said Bertie, “I’d recognise that ugly mug anywhere.  But wait, do you know what?  I think it is Colin !”

“Don’t be silly,” said Sadie, ” But then again, oh, I think you are right.  You don’t suppose that Wicked Step Mother could have turned Colin into stone?”

“I do suppose,” said Bertie, “Look what she did to me.  I used to be a handsome prince.”

And although the little tadpoles had a lovely day, free from Colin’s tricks and his moaning and groaning, Bertie started to feel just a little bit guilty.  After all, it was he who had asked for the help of a wicked witch.  But he hadn’t meant it.  Not really.  We all say things we don’t mean when we are a bit cross.  And so he thought of a plan, and that night he hopped over to pay a visit to the Wicked Stepmother.   He was rather frightened because, after all, she is a very wicked witch indeed.   He waited for a long time outside her door, feeling rather nervous.  Eventually he called out: “Croak!”  And when the Wicked Stepmother came out, he shouted, “Trick or Treat!”  Before she could reply, he splattered her with green slime from his mouth, and hopped away as fast as his bendy legs could carry him.

“Grrrrr!  Bertie! ” she shouted.

Bertie waited until it was very late at night – past half past seven – and then he knocked very loudly on the door again. And then he shouted, “Trick or Treat !”  And pushed a skateboard under her feet so that she fell over and banged her head on the floor, and then he hopped away.

“Grrr! Just you wait.  I’ll get you Bertie.  You’ve gone too far my filthy little frog!”

And then he waited until the King came to say goodnight to the Wicked Stepmother.  The King knocked on the door quite loudly. Suddenly the door opened and the Queen leaned out shouting, “I’ll turn you into a maggot you stupid piece of green slime!  Oh, Oh Sorry your royal highness.   I didn’t meant to. ”  But the queen strutted down the corridor, muttering about how one of his wives had never been so really, really rude,  and how the last one who was rather rude got her head chopped off.   The Wicked Stepmother was rather afraid.   Just then,  Bertie hopped into view.

“Er, Trick or Treat?”  he said mildly.

And even thought the Wicked Stepmother was really cross, she realised that she had been outwitted, and she agreed to come down to the pond, and to turn Colin back into a fish again.  And all the Pond Life were very pleased to see Colin swimming around again, because even though he is a bit grumpy, he still is their friend, and friends are very important.  And they saved up for a couple of chocolate coloured dead flies so that even Colin the Carp cheered up for a little bit.

And that’s the true Storynory of  Prince Bertie’ the Frog’s Halloween.

Stories in this series.

  1. Bertie's Christmas Storynory
  2. How Prince Bertie became Bertie the Frog
  3. Bertie's Easter Egg Hunt
  4. Prince Bertie and the Dragon
  5. How Prince Bertie Ran Away
  6. Tim's Swimming Lesson
  7. The Sweetest Princess Competition
  8. Bertie on Holiday
  9. How Colin the Carp Became Grumpy
  10. Halloween on the Pond
  11. Bertie Meets Father Christmas
  12. Bertie Valentine
  13. Bertie Writes A Book
  14. Colin: The Grumpy King
  15. Video: How Old Are You?
  16. Agent Bertie
  17. Three Short Bertie Stories
  18. Colin's Grumpy Christmas
  19. Bertie's Year of the Rat
  20. Bertie's Double
  21. Bertie and the Lion
  22. Bertie and the Ghost
  23. Bertie and the Mermaid
  24. Sadie's Broken Heart
  25. Bertie's Car
  26. Tim The Tadpole's Exams

109 Comments

  • Andrew
    Posted October 29, 2006 at 8:59 am | Permalink

    I love all your Storynories. I can’t wait to hear the next one. Your Halloween one was my favorite one so far.

    Andrew-5 years old

  • jeny
    Posted March 5, 2007 at 8:51 am | Permalink

    I really enjoy your story.
    I love halloween and halloween story’s.

  • Winly
    Posted March 9, 2007 at 7:29 pm | Permalink

    Wonderful story beautifully narrated by Natasha.

    But why isn’t there a full text for this story?

  • berte the crud head!
    Posted May 21, 2007 at 3:07 am | Permalink

    he is mean

  • Stephanie
    Posted May 23, 2007 at 9:46 pm | Permalink

    Berte the crud head isnt a nice name, it is mean sounding…

    and inapropiate…

  • Stephanie
    Posted May 23, 2007 at 9:47 pm | Permalink

    Winly, maybe there isnt a full text because its suposed to be a spooky surprise

  • Saffron-Sheryl
    Posted September 16, 2007 at 10:01 am | Permalink

    Hi Bertie,
    Did you go for any skateboard competitons as all the stories or almost all the stories have ‘Bertie ……skateboarding …..’
    And was your Halloween on the Pond better than the ones in the palace or the palace one is better? please reply…..

  • Saffron-Sheryl
    Posted September 16, 2007 at 10:16 am | Permalink

    Hi Bertie,
    How long would you take to reply our messages?I really want to know.

  • Saffron-Sheryl
    Posted September 19, 2007 at 6:30 am | Permalink

    Hi Bertie ,
    Did you enjoy your life in the pond with all the other pond creatures?

  • Posted September 19, 2007 at 7:30 am | Permalink

    Dear Sheryl, sorry for my slow reply. Life has been very busy on the pond recently. We’ve had some carp trouble again. When I was a prince, I did go in for a skateboarding championship. I’ll tell you about it one day. And Halloween on the pond was the best ever !

  • Saffron-Sheryl
    Posted September 21, 2007 at 8:39 am | Permalink

    Since you said so can I sugest something?
    Hope you won’t mind.
    You can send the story to me when you are free at this e-mail address:XXX
    Or you can ask Natasha to read it that you can create another story and i bet everyone will want to know wherthere you had gone for skateboarding competitons.

    And you only reply us when you are free right?

  • Posted September 21, 2007 at 8:45 am | Permalink

    Hi Sheryl, I hope you don’t mind, I’ve edited your email out of the comment – we try not to publish contact details of our listeners – but I’ve got a backup. But thanks ! I’ll have to ask Natasha to tell the story one day. (It isn’t written yet, so it might take a little while).

  • Saffron-Sheryl
    Posted September 22, 2007 at 6:38 am | Permalink

    Nevermind Bertie
    I won’t mind as that is good for me .
    I will be waiting for the story….to be published…
    waiting and waiting

  • abriah
    Posted October 17, 2007 at 5:46 pm | Permalink

    i love this story so much is is so cool

  • Susie
    Posted October 18, 2007 at 8:00 pm | Permalink

    I love all of your stories Bertie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Susie
    Posted October 18, 2007 at 8:08 pm | Permalink

    Hello everyone!!!!

  • Posted October 18, 2007 at 8:29 pm | Permalink

    Susie thanks for your nice comments

  • Kobebrian
    Posted October 31, 2007 at 10:34 pm | Permalink

    hthis story iscool and it rocks!!!

  • Kobebrian
    Posted October 31, 2007 at 10:38 pm | Permalink

    I can’t wait to read a nother book thats cool.I hope there is a beter one.

  • Kobebrian
    Posted October 31, 2007 at 10:41 pm | Permalink

    Bertie what do you like about the story?

  • Bertie
    Posted November 1, 2007 at 1:32 pm | Permalink

    Hi Kobebrian, it’s a little bit scary and a little bit funny ! Thanks for your comments.

  • Mollie
    Posted November 1, 2007 at 8:53 pm | Permalink

    For older children wouldn’t this be not very scary like you said?

  • LeAnn
    Posted November 4, 2007 at 8:11 pm | Permalink

    I think this story is good. I had a good halloween. I did not see any mosters when I went tricker treating.

  • dalton
    Posted November 7, 2007 at 4:12 pm | Permalink

    very very stupid

  • inayah
    Posted December 27, 2007 at 8:23 pm | Permalink

    i like how bertie splattered green slime over the wicked witch and how he put a skateboard under her legs until she fell down and how she turned colin the carp into a statue fish with water coming out of his mouth.

  • maria
    Posted December 31, 2007 at 5:02 pm | Permalink

    i love the fairy tails

  • nilofar
    Posted December 31, 2007 at 9:20 pm | Permalink

    i like the long stories and my faivourate one is called beauty and the beast.

  • iBob
    Posted January 27, 2008 at 11:24 pm | Permalink

    Halloween

  • Mitch
    Posted January 30, 2008 at 7:31 pm | Permalink

    This is Halloween!!!

  • Mitch
    Posted January 30, 2008 at 7:32 pm | Permalink

    Hi Max!!

  • Max
    Posted January 30, 2008 at 7:33 pm | Permalink

    hi Mitch!!!

  • Nach Libre
    Posted January 30, 2008 at 7:34 pm | Permalink

    Awesome story

  • Nacho Libre
    Posted January 30, 2008 at 7:34 pm | Permalink

    very awesome story

  • McLovin
    Posted January 30, 2008 at 7:35 pm | Permalink

    I am McLovin!!!

  • McLovin
    Posted January 31, 2008 at 1:55 am | Permalink

    “Halloween on the Pond” is great.Please tell me where is the text of the story. Thanks!

  • David
    Posted January 31, 2008 at 2:08 am | Permalink

    Hello Bertie.
    We enjoy “Halloween on the Pond” a lot. It will be greatly appreciated if you could send me the full text to my email: hellodavidlin@126.com

  • pie-lover
    Posted February 7, 2008 at 7:49 am | Permalink

    nice story, but a bit long

  • ellie exzs
    Posted February 18, 2008 at 4:46 am | Permalink

    happy

  • ole
    Posted February 20, 2008 at 7:51 am | Permalink

    lol

  • Aashman
    Posted March 5, 2008 at 11:02 am | Permalink

    This story is a spooky that i think this can bring nightmares to children in age of 3or4!!

  • Marin
    Posted March 26, 2008 at 9:31 am | Permalink

    DEN SUTTER PIK!

  • Knud Erik
    Posted March 26, 2008 at 9:39 am | Permalink

    I love Cakes And DYNAMITE T.N.T And Dynamite ! Guns n roses ! Civil war (live voodoo Child)

  • bill dengler
    Posted March 31, 2008 at 4:14 pm | Permalink

    I have not listened yet I will listen soon.
    I fondluy
    bill dengler

  • Anonymous
    Posted March 31, 2008 at 4:15 pm | Permalink
  • JEREMY
    Posted April 1, 2008 at 1:02 am | Permalink

    NICE COMMENT

  • demi
    Posted April 8, 2008 at 4:29 pm | Permalink

    This book was verry good!

  • d
    Posted April 11, 2008 at 1:07 pm | Permalink

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  • shaunee*********
    Posted April 16, 2008 at 6:25 pm | Permalink

    This is a good story,i love haloween!!!!
    ****************************************

  • Mickey Mouse
    Posted April 19, 2008 at 9:55 pm | Permalink

    Please add text to this one and make sure to spell it right. No offense meant but you don’t spell very good .I know because I do it sometimes.

  • Kiven
    Posted April 20, 2008 at 11:58 am | Permalink

    It’s bloodcurdling.

  • PEYTON
    Posted April 21, 2008 at 4:28 pm | Permalink

    Hi!

  • Erin
    Posted April 21, 2008 at 4:31 pm | Permalink

    This book Rocks!

  • Carlee
    Posted April 21, 2008 at 4:34 pm | Permalink

    I love the Doctor!

  • Ashlynne
    Posted April 21, 2008 at 4:35 pm | Permalink

    You ROCK

  • sierra
    Posted May 8, 2008 at 1:58 pm | Permalink

    i have heard my mom read this to her class

  • amber
    Posted May 17, 2008 at 10:59 am | Permalink

    it was quite good but it wasn’t the best i do like it though. It was not scary.

  • Rosmerta
    Posted August 6, 2008 at 12:49 pm | Permalink

    Do flies taste good?
    Do you like green slime?
    Please tell me

  • Posted August 6, 2008 at 1:25 pm | Permalink

    Hi Romerta

    To tell you the truth, flies and green slime don’t taste nearly as good as chocolate.

  • pearl
    Posted August 18, 2008 at 6:34 am | Permalink

    please please please tell me where the story is?

  • Posted August 18, 2008 at 7:53 am | Permalink

    Pearl, Sorry the text seems to have gone. I’ll have look around for it. Please be patient. Thanks 1

  • no name
    Posted October 7, 2008 at 3:10 pm | Permalink

    So stupid

  • latasha
    Posted October 20, 2008 at 6:28 pm | Permalink

    I let my class here this story and they enjoyed it.

  • Posted October 22, 2008 at 12:48 pm | Permalink

    my name is will,I LIVE IN IRELAND WE EAT PEOPLE

  • NO NAME!!!!!!!!!!!
    Posted October 22, 2008 at 12:54 pm | Permalink

    MY NA ME I S N O N A M E!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I LIVE IN NB,USA

  • miriam
    Posted October 27, 2008 at 9:36 pm | Permalink

    I adored the story my younger one, jenna fell asleep straight away! she sed she loves them and cant wait to hear another.
    Thank you so much you got her to sleep at last.
    many thanks
    miriam

  • Posted October 28, 2008 at 7:00 pm | Permalink

    bertie can you make a story nory about me? if you can, here a list of things thati like. ice cream kit kat bars pastry kiks you natasha and tim my birthday me my pool my dad my mom sisters brothers grandma the mall my bulid a bear gift card my doll my dog. ps.please please make a story about cole carp and colin carp.

  • samuel
    Posted October 29, 2008 at 4:24 pm | Permalink

    i liked that book that was called hollween in the pond and the scary pumkin he was funny and ther was a boy named mitch he liked stoyies

  • LIZETTE
    Posted October 29, 2008 at 4:30 pm | Permalink

    I LIKED THE PUMPKIN IT WAS REALLY FUNNY THERE WAS A BOY HIS NAME WAS MITCH I REALLY LIKED THE STORY.

  • awsome
    Posted October 31, 2008 at 6:00 pm | Permalink

    i just finshe reading this with my class lmaoo its was ughh l0l pero my class listin and my teacher is funny l0l ily miss BLAIR

  • Divyam
    Posted November 22, 2008 at 8:31 am | Permalink

    I enjoyed reading the story .It is fun to read the scary story sometimes.But it is funny story instead of scary.haaa….haaaa….

  • Posted November 23, 2008 at 3:40 am | Permalink

    I thought the story was spooky. My favourite part was when the witch told the king “Go away you ugly green slime!”. It was very scary when he said that he would chop her head off.

  • popoipopi
    Posted January 10, 2009 at 6:59 pm | Permalink

    love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Michelle
    Posted January 21, 2009 at 2:39 am | Permalink

    **Bertie,please answer me this time!**

    Yes,it is a good story,but why isn’t there a full text??

    loyal fan
    Michelle^^

  • Posted January 21, 2009 at 6:54 pm | Permalink

    Michelle , I do answer you … think we must have lost this text. Sorry.

  • bri and kk
    Posted January 25, 2009 at 6:47 pm | Permalink

    it will be cool if it was good but not . i like it but i dont like it it is not gooooooooooooood

  • ^^Phoebe^^
    Posted March 5, 2009 at 7:51 am | Permalink

    ***Reply to me Bertie!!!!!!***
    Bertie, I think this story is er,
    um, a very funny stories! I mean,
    I think it is one of the funnyest storys! And, beacause of the Ya Ha Ha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Royal fan
    Phoebe.

  • Sam
    Posted April 18, 2009 at 4:28 am | Permalink

    I WANT DETAILS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Posted April 18, 2009 at 1:09 pm | Permalink

    Sam, I’m afraid we’ve lost the text to this story, but there is the audio for you to listen to

  • kyle
    Posted April 28, 2009 at 3:12 pm | Permalink

    it was cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • rosa taylor
    Posted July 4, 2009 at 6:34 pm | Permalink

    WOW ITS FABULUS.

  • Lulu
    Posted July 6, 2009 at 6:59 pm | Permalink

    I love this story
    i love all the srorys

  • Posted July 10, 2009 at 10:06 pm | Permalink

    nice story. Short and sweet.

  • akash
    Posted July 14, 2009 at 5:02 am | Permalink

    hi! Bertie. As you know I am your new listener, I am trying my best in passing information about this website in between my friends. Will you become my friend??????????????????????????

  • mikayla
    Posted July 28, 2009 at 3:29 am | Permalink

    berty is colin rilly rillllllllllllllllllllllllllllllly mean tell me tell me tellllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee pless

  • mikayla
    Posted July 28, 2009 at 3:31 am | Permalink

    i don’t mean to be mean sorry i toalk a lot lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol

  • Posted July 28, 2009 at 3:48 am | Permalink

    Hello Mikayla, Colin is really, really really mean, but you get used to him, sort of.

  • Anonymous
    Posted August 24, 2009 at 9:54 am | Permalink

    Hi, Natasha. I’m RD from india m studying in 9th grade. have read about you on this site. Your job is awesome for usI’ve downloaded your 35 stories and all are enjoyable. All the best for your future works.
    RD-Rajendra

  • ABIGAEL
    Posted August 26, 2009 at 6:52 pm | Permalink

    BOO BOO BOO BOO BOO BOO BOO BOO BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

  • pandora
    Posted September 2, 2009 at 7:24 pm | Permalink

    is bertie EVER going to be a prince, and will the wicked queen ever endd!!!!???

  • HEATHER
    Posted September 7, 2009 at 6:57 pm | Permalink

    I LIKE THE STORIES

  • Jacob
    Posted October 21, 2009 at 1:45 am | Permalink

    My brother listens to these stories all the time and I think they are pretty entertaining too! I love this Halloween story, it is a great little kid scary story.

  • MB
    Posted October 27, 2009 at 3:11 pm | Permalink

    Is it possible to have the text with the auditory?

  • Posted October 27, 2009 at 3:14 pm | Permalink

    Hi MB, most of our stories have texts, but I’m not quite sure what happened to the text of Halloween on the Pond. It may have got lost over time.

  • longway
    Posted October 27, 2009 at 5:14 pm | Permalink

    hello :)

    i love your stories, too! thank you so much! i’m german and i hear the storys in order to improve my english. and, of course, to enjoy your wonderful website!

    but where’s the text? i can’t find a text or i’m blind?

    best regards

  • Posted October 27, 2009 at 5:22 pm | Permalink

    Dear Longway, just on this story and one or two others the text is missing. Sorry about that.

  • Posted November 1, 2009 at 9:28 pm | Permalink

    your hallowen story was interesting I would like to hear and read at the same time please write the story on your storynory website

  • tyler
    Posted November 2, 2009 at 2:14 am | Permalink

    hi you are cool

  • Posted November 2, 2009 at 3:28 pm | Permalink

    Hello, my name is Joann Ridgebacker, and I am part of a school for the deaf. My students love the stories on this site, and each have their own computers to read storynories. Unfortunately, this story has no text, so they requested the text from me. I came to ask for the text. If you could email it to the dean’s email: cody.di.yang@gmail.com. Thank you.

  • Posted November 2, 2009 at 4:46 pm | Permalink

    Dear Joann, Really sorry we don’t have the text but if I have a chance I will transcribe it in the next day or so.

  • lindsey!
    Posted November 13, 2009 at 5:14 pm | Permalink

    this is only cool cuz the way they talk !

  • tyra
    Posted November 13, 2009 at 5:15 pm | Permalink

    this stuff is dumb.

  • Kendra and Kayla
    Posted November 30, 2009 at 12:45 am | Permalink

    Cool story, we love it! Bertie, you should write more Halloween stories!Why did Princess Beatrice walk around the pond? and say treat-or- treat?

  • Tamara
    Posted January 2, 2010 at 2:45 pm | Permalink

    Dear Bertie,
    Your story is very enjoyable.

    Please, please send me the text
    of Haloween on the Pond.
    I’m a teacher from Russia and I want my pupils to act this tail out.

    Best wishes,
    Tamara

  • Posted January 2, 2010 at 3:04 pm | Permalink

    HI Tamara, I’ll have to retype it, but will try to do so this weekend. Really glad your pupils want to act it out.

  • george
    Posted January 4, 2010 at 3:49 am | Permalink

    why don`t you out whit the evil step mother in to turning you bake to normal

  • Posted January 5, 2010 at 12:19 pm | Permalink

    Dear Tamara,

    I’ve transcribed the story. You should be able to print it out clutter free from the screen. I do hope you class enjoys acting it out.

  • alice
    Posted January 22, 2010 at 9:45 am | Permalink

    scary… can’t write korean

  • beth
    Posted February 5, 2010 at 5:12 pm | Permalink

    not sared at all rubbish story make a better one good voice thank you.

  • dionte
    Posted February 15, 2010 at 6:39 pm | Permalink

    not scary at all

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