Comments on: Jack and The Pirate School Part 2

By: Bobby

Bobby — Mon, 15 Feb 2010 19:36:54 +0000

The story is really good.The captain is really scary,I do’nt like him!!!

By: Kendra and Kayla

Kendra and Kayla — Sat, 28 Nov 2009 02:24:21 +0000

what a weird pirate! Is Captain Blackheart a real live person?

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By: lpc

lpc — Wed, 28 Jan 2009 16:47:05 +0000

part 3 is good 2

By: lpc

lpc — Wed, 28 Jan 2009 16:45:55 +0000

better than part 1

By: Angel

Angel — Mon, 12 Jan 2009 21:54:33 +0000

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By: christopher

christopher — Sun, 23 Nov 2008 10:16:11 +0000

IT was exiting because Jack was held to be a prisoner.

By: Lucas

Lucas — Tue, 27 May 2008 06:47:31 +0000

It was a trick. Jack though he sould tell his mum and dad but he was a prisoner

By: Marty

Marty — Mon, 26 May 2008 12:14:13 +0000

I can’t wait until part three.

By: Alysha.T

Alysha.T — Mon, 26 May 2008 11:23:49 +0000

WOW again
A prisinor in a school thats Weird !!!

By: qadeer3S

qadeer3S — Mon, 26 May 2008 08:32:31 +0000

it was scary and sad.

By: Jessica 3-S

Jessica 3-S — Mon, 26 May 2008 08:08:03 +0000

I SIMPLY LOVED IT!!!
IT WAS MUCH MUCH MORE EXCITING THAN THE FIRST PART. (AND A LITTLE SCARY.)

By: jemima

jemima — Mon, 26 May 2008 00:19:39 +0000

Great story!,
Captain Blackheart sounds Menacing!

By: Jasmine

Jasmine — Sun, 25 May 2008 15:26:50 +0000

This story is not scary it is exiting.

By: jatin

jatin — Sun, 25 May 2008 12:18:07 +0000

i loved this story becasue i like the part when jack came to pirte school insted of sailing school

By: Dario

Dario — Sun, 25 May 2008 11:54:23 +0000

It was realy funny because jack was ment to go to sailing school but he went to pirate school and he became a prisnor of Captain black heart

By: Finley

Finley — Sun, 25 May 2008 11:42:34 +0000

I like the part when the pirate laughed and said,

“You’re imprisoned in the school.”

By: Zaynab

Zaynab — Sun, 25 May 2008 11:17:31 +0000

This is a very exciting part of the story where Jack is now in Pirate school, and its also quite scary.
That’s the whole fun of it – I like scary stories.

By: Jonathan

Jonathan — Sun, 25 May 2008 10:49:39 +0000

wow!!

By: Bianca

Bianca — Sun, 25 May 2008 10:48:04 +0000

this is more interesting than the first one because Jack is their prisoner!

By: Aditya

Aditya — Sun, 25 May 2008 10:00:44 +0000

Part 2 was much more exciting than part 1. It was exciting because it had lots of funny words. I wonder as to how did the writer of the story thought such an exciting part?

By: Megan

Megan — Sun, 25 May 2008 08:37:30 +0000

funny

By: DERRICK

DERRICK — Sun, 25 May 2008 07:15:16 +0000

This is very interesting because it is freaky.

By: Tom

Tom — Sun, 25 May 2008 04:57:39 +0000

Why is jack a prisoner?

By: Jenny

Jenny — Sun, 25 May 2008 04:47:44 +0000

I think this story in part 3 will be better

By: Marissa

Marissa — Sun, 25 May 2008 04:32:35 +0000

Hey i thought that part 2 was not as funny as part 1 but i can’t wait to listen to part three

By: Ethan

Ethan — Sun, 25 May 2008 03:13:29 +0000

i liked this story becos it was funny how captain balck heart speecks.and saling school is full with girls.

By: MELODIE

MELODIE — Sun, 25 May 2008 02:14:16 +0000

It felt a bit scary when pirate black heart
shouted to jack and said you are a prisoner.
It’s good that jack was really very brave.
It was really more scary than part 1.I am really
looking forward to part 3.

By: Madeleine 3G

Madeleine 3G — Sat, 24 May 2008 12:40:13 +0000

I liked part two because it was scary and interesting. Sometimes it gave me a fright.I think Jack is scared of Captain Black Heart.

By: Mariam 3S

Mariam 3S — Sat, 24 May 2008 12:14:37 +0000

this was a little better

By: Isar

Isar — Sat, 24 May 2008 11:50:45 +0000

This part is so not scary Its so exciting !!!!!

By: megha

megha — Sat, 24 May 2008 11:23:05 +0000

I think captain black heart is very mean. But it is very exciting and a bit funny

By: Sydney 3W

Sydney 3W — Sat, 24 May 2008 09:50:11 +0000

I dont think Jack likes captin black heart very much.

By: Peter 3R

Peter 3R — Sat, 24 May 2008 08:35:22 +0000

it was super

By: diya

diya — Sat, 24 May 2008 06:42:51 +0000

it was great

By: Christie

Christie — Sat, 24 May 2008 06:05:19 +0000

This part is funny.Jack was excited but a bit
frightened.Captin Blackheart doesn’t seem very nice.I can’t wait to see part 3.

By: Bryan Parkson

Bryan Parkson — Sat, 24 May 2008 04:00:10 +0000

I hope Jack is ok because he is now captian Blackheats prisornor.And I don’t now if Jack is ok.

By: George

George — Sat, 24 May 2008 03:34:25 +0000

I like the bit that the scary pirate teacher when he said sailing school .I like it beacause it sounded funny.

By: Nicholas cai

Nicholas cai — Sat, 24 May 2008 02:20:04 +0000

part2 was great

By: tetsu

tetsu — Sat, 24 May 2008 02:12:28 +0000

I think he would miss his sisters and dad and mom!!!!!!! cant wait for part two

By: Lily 3G

Lily 3G — Sat, 24 May 2008 00:50:56 +0000

This part was very exiting
because Jack was mean’t to go to sailing school but there was a mix up and Jack went to pirate school insted of going to sailing school captain blackheart is quite mean and nasty and always booms

By: Lily

Lily — Fri, 23 May 2008 23:52:08 +0000

Jack was feeling a bit nervous because captain Blackheart was kind of mean.

By: Philippe

Philippe — Fri, 23 May 2008 13:36:02 +0000

this is the part when Jack realised he got onto the wrong boat and instead of being in a sailing school he got in a pirate school.
This was when he had to wear ragged trousers he must have been scared to be in this dirty ship.

By: Jon

Jon — Fri, 23 May 2008 13:31:42 +0000

This is better than part one!

By: Shailja

Shailja — Fri, 23 May 2008 11:41:08 +0000

I think that Jack is going to miss his family a lot.

By: Christine

Christine — Fri, 23 May 2008 09:59:28 +0000

it inproved alot because jack was a prisoner.

By: luke

luke — Fri, 23 May 2008 08:59:20 +0000

I think this part was really interesting

By: chloe

chloe — Thu, 22 May 2008 11:52:50 +0000

It was so funny because he was at pirate school not at sailling school!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

By: Rydah

Rydah — Thu, 22 May 2008 11:44:04 +0000

This is improved sooo much!!!

By: Christian

Christian — Thu, 22 May 2008 09:18:43 +0000

That was funny because he was at pirate school not sailing school.It was also funny at the end because he became a prisoner.

Can’t what till third part.