Comments on: Jack and the Pirate School Part 5 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/ Just another WordPress site Sat, 31 Jul 2010 04:34:57 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: maggiehttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-7/#comment-38358 maggie Fri, 11 Jun 2010 16:58:39 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-38358 hey i really like this story hey i really like this story

]]> By: Dilys Tatehttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-6/#comment-35518 Dilys Tate Thu, 11 Mar 2010 12:30:35 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-35518 Hey I REALLY like you story! Hey I REALLY like you story!

]]> By: benhttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-6/#comment-31245 ben Fri, 04 Dec 2009 02:24:42 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-31245 it was an awesome story i liked it it was an awesome story i liked it

]]> By: jamiehttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-6/#comment-29655 jamie Wed, 14 Oct 2009 22:48:25 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-29655 it was so so fumey and it was a garat store it was so so fumey and it was a garat store

]]> By: jamiehttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-6/#comment-29654 jamie Wed, 14 Oct 2009 22:47:26 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-29654 you da bomb you da bomb

]]> By: Bertiehttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-6/#comment-25939 Bertie Thu, 30 Apr 2009 12:51:17 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-25939 Yes, Part 5 is the last chapter of Jack Yes, Part 5 is the last chapter of Jack

]]> By: johnhttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-6/#comment-25938 john Thu, 30 Apr 2009 11:53:28 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-25938 it is complete? it is complete?

]]> By: sharanyahttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-6/#comment-24260 sharanya Tue, 17 Mar 2009 18:19:05 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-24260 i loved the story. but i wish the pirates knew he was back on land. and i really wish that they started to know how clever jack accually was. i really loved the part where his dad called captain black heart horrid names he deserves that to call jack a land lubber. thanks bertie:) i loved the story. but i wish the pirates knew he was back on land. and i really wish that they started to know how clever jack accually was. i really loved the part where his dad called captain black heart horrid names he deserves that to call jack a land lubber. thanks bertie

:)

]]> By: Briehttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-6/#comment-23138 Brie Sat, 07 Feb 2009 22:07:58 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-23138 Kool story! I love it! Kool story! I love it!

]]> By: stephanyhttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-6/#comment-21268 stephany Wed, 03 Dec 2008 01:06:04 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-21268 this is a gud website for kids to go on line to read books and play games of study good idea of this website my daughter is doing better in skool ever since she been in this she been doin bad but now she is doing better thanks for puting up this website i thank u so muchlove stepfy this is a gud website for kids to go on line to read books and play games of study good idea of this website
my daughter is doing better in skool ever since she been in this she been doin bad but now she is doing better
thanks for puting up this website i thank u so much

love stepfy

]]> By: Rowan 3ghttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-6/#comment-21028 Rowan 3g Mon, 24 Nov 2008 11:02:55 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-21028 It was really cool. I like the part when, the pirates made Jack eat disgusting food. It was really cool. I like the part when, the pirates made Jack eat disgusting food.

]]> By: vtftgyhjhttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-6/#comment-20122 vtftgyhj Tue, 21 Oct 2008 15:45:58 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-20122 i like storynjunkolkol 3 years oldenglanddoor 3554 i like story

njunkolkol 3 years old

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]]> By: Charmianhttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-6/#comment-19490 Charmian Sat, 20 Sep 2008 23:46:35 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-19490 The story is very fun when Jack walked the plank! The story is very fun when Jack walked the plank!

]]> By: Anonymoushttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-6/#comment-18227 Anonymous Tue, 15 Jul 2008 19:36:41 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-18227 I realy enjoed jack and the pirate school and even my teacher has been reading this to us it was greatbye I realy enjoed jack and the pirate school and even my teacher has been reading this to us
it was great

bye

]]> By: PETER AND SOPHIAhttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-6/#comment-16827 PETER AND SOPHIA Thu, 29 May 2008 04:03:26 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16827 Blow into sheeps bladder no thank you! I hate sheeps jellied eyes Blow into sheeps bladder no thank you!
I hate sheeps jellied eyes

]]> By: Alysha.Thttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-6/#comment-16801 Alysha.T Tue, 27 May 2008 11:50:31 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16801 duna duna duna duna duna duna duna land again !! Impressive !! Marvellouse!! Perfect !!!!! and Brilliant !!! All THOSE WORDS ! Thanks Natasha and Bertie !! duna duna duna duna duna duna duna land again !!
Impressive !!
Marvellouse!!
Perfect !!!!!
and
Brilliant !!!
All THOSE WORDS !
Thanks Natasha and Bertie !!

]]> By: Lucashttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-6/#comment-16796 Lucas Tue, 27 May 2008 07:26:08 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16796 It was a very clever plan by Jack and Ben. He got home safely. It was a very clever plan by Jack and Ben.
He got home safely.

]]> By: ryanhttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-6/#comment-16783 ryan Mon, 26 May 2008 23:29:52 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16783 it was great it was great

]]> By: Martyhttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-6/#comment-16774 Marty Mon, 26 May 2008 12:45:59 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16774 I love this part of the story because I liked the part where Jack walked the plank. I love this part of the story because I liked the part where Jack walked the plank.

]]> By: andreahttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-6/#comment-16770 andrea Mon, 26 May 2008 12:13:30 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16770 it is the greatest one story nory RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS it is the greatest one story nory RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
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]]> By: Zaynabhttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-6/#comment-16768 Zaynab Mon, 26 May 2008 11:43:38 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16768 I think that this is a great adventure story. It was very exciting, it made me feel scared at times and I felt frightened for Jack. Overall it was really really good, I really enjoyed it and I liked how Jack’s plan worked so easily. Also, I felt sad when Jack had to leave Ben at the end because although he was a pirate he was still a good friend. I think that this is a great adventure story. It was very exciting, it made me feel scared at times and I felt frightened for Jack.
Overall it was really really good, I really enjoyed it and I liked how Jack’s plan worked so easily. Also, I felt sad when Jack had to leave Ben at the end because although he was a pirate he was still a good friend.

]]> By: Qadeer 3Shttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-6/#comment-16763 Qadeer 3S Mon, 26 May 2008 09:13:17 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16763 My favourite part was when CaptainBlackheart hit jacks part and hit him in the water! My favourite part was when CaptainBlackheart
hit jacks part and hit him in the water!

]]> By: Jessica 3-Shttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-5/#comment-16758 Jessica 3-S Mon, 26 May 2008 08:27:41 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16758 IPRESSING!!! I FELT REALLY SCARED WHEN JACK FELT THE WATER CLOSING ABOVE HIS HEAD AS I THHOUT HE WOULD SINK. IPRESSING!!!
I FELT REALLY SCARED WHEN JACK FELT THE WATER CLOSING ABOVE HIS HEAD AS I THHOUT HE WOULD SINK.

]]> By: Jasminehttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-5/#comment-16730 Jasmine Sun, 25 May 2008 15:53:14 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16730 I like the part when jack and ben be friend. I like the part when jack and ben be friend.

]]> By: Rishabhttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-5/#comment-16722 Rishab Sun, 25 May 2008 13:10:03 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16722 [part 3] how someone said DOWN HIS/YOUR SPINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I enjoyed the story so much that I was imagning I was Jack.It was very uniqe from other pirate story's.I liked theplan it was realy cool and,was very deceptivfe.My favorite character was Jack and Ben because they were really cunning. [part 3] how someone said DOWN HIS/YOUR SPINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I enjoyed the story so much that I was imagning I was Jack.It was very uniqe from other pirate story’s.I liked theplan it was realy cool and,was very deceptivfe.My favorite character was Jack and Ben because they were really cunning.

]]> By: 3G samuelhttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-5/#comment-16721 3G samuel Sun, 25 May 2008 12:49:30 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16721 This adventure story was so strange.How can there be pirates in the modern year??? But I liked how that Jack's plan worked so easily. This adventure story was so strange.How can there be pirates in the modern year???
But I liked how that Jack’s plan worked so easily.

]]> By: biancahttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-5/#comment-16720 bianca Sun, 25 May 2008 12:43:06 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16720 i think the plan was really good but it was sad when jack had to leave ben although he was a pirate he still was a good friend. i think the plan was really good but it was sad when jack had to leave ben although he was a pirate he still was a good friend.

]]> By: james CE2blhttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-5/#comment-16719 james CE2bl Sun, 25 May 2008 12:30:24 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16719 It is so weird that um...Um..COOL! It is so weird that um…Um..COOL!

]]> By: sophiahttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-5/#comment-16715 sophia Sun, 25 May 2008 12:17:45 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16715 I loved the story alot!!!! I liked their plan.It was cool but wierd! I loved the story alot!!!! I liked their plan.It was cool but wierd!

]]> By: Dario 3Rhttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-5/#comment-16713 Dario 3R Sun, 25 May 2008 12:14:16 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16713 it was exiting becuse when Jack walk the plank you don't know what will happen next maybe he stays in the water and drown. or he or gets stranded in a island and never gets save. or he gets home it was exiting becuse when Jack walk the plank you don’t know what will happen next maybe he stays in the water and drown. or he or gets stranded in a island and never gets save. or he gets home

]]> By: Zabrinahttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-5/#comment-16712 Zabrina Sun, 25 May 2008 12:09:49 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16712 I felt a bit scared at the first part of the story.But through the story the story didn't felt scary anymore because when Jack fell on the plank luckly he found a ballon and went back to shore and was safe. which then he went back home I felt a bit scared at the first part of the story.But through the story the story didn’t felt scary anymore because when Jack fell on the plank luckly he found a ballon and went back to shore and was safe. which then he went back home

]]> By: brandon 3Ghttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-5/#comment-16703 brandon 3G Sun, 25 May 2008 11:38:25 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16703 This was a intesting story from storynory and very,very disceptivfe.The plan was cool and a bit wierd!?VERY,VERY,VERY COOL STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. This was a intesting story from storynory and very,very disceptivfe.The plan was cool and a bit wierd!?

VERY,VERY,VERY COOL STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

]]> By: brandon 3Ghttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-5/#comment-16700 brandon 3G Sun, 25 May 2008 11:30:01 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16700 This was a very interstige ending and very discitive story.the plan was cool!!!!!!!!!!!But also wired.......!!!!!COOL STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was a very interstige ending and very discitive story.the plan was cool!!!!!!!!!!!But also wired…….!!!!!

COOL STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

]]> By: edward 3whttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-5/#comment-16698 edward 3w Sun, 25 May 2008 11:08:56 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16698 posted may 25,2008at 7:05 am grate ending!!!!!!!!!!!!! posted may 25,2008at 7:05 am
grate ending!!!!!!!!!!!!!

]]> By: owenhttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-5/#comment-16695 owen Sun, 25 May 2008 11:01:31 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16695 I really liked it because it was funny and good. My favourite character was the parrot he was really funny because he ate all the cake. I really liked it because it was funny and good. My favourite character was the
parrot he was really funny because he ate all
the cake.

]]> By: Jonathanhttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-5/#comment-16694 Jonathan Sun, 25 May 2008 10:57:42 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16694 good ending!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! good ending!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

]]> By: Adityahttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-5/#comment-16693 Aditya Sun, 25 May 2008 10:56:42 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16693 I liked all the parts in the story. Though Part 5 was little confusing because the other people did not die with the captain. I liked all the parts in the story. Though Part 5 was little confusing because the other people did not die with the captain.

]]> By: Nathanhttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-5/#comment-16685 Nathan Sun, 25 May 2008 10:27:49 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16685 I like the part when Jack had a little bite of the food.I loved the story. I like the part when Jack had a little bite of the food.

I loved the story.

]]> By: Jeffhttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-5/#comment-16680 Jeff Sun, 25 May 2008 09:47:41 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16680 I liked it when Jack jumped off the plank. I liked it when Jack jumped off the plank.

]]> By: megan mcauleyhttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-5/#comment-16676 megan mcauley Sun, 25 May 2008 09:12:30 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16676 great ending great ending

]]> By: Dylan Wacksman 3Whttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-5/#comment-16671 Dylan Wacksman 3W Sun, 25 May 2008 08:32:48 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16671 It had lots of adjectives and it was very interesting and it had a lot of expression. It had lots of adjectives and it was very interesting and it had a lot of expression.

]]> By: chloe3Rhttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-5/#comment-16669 chloe3R Sun, 25 May 2008 08:00:34 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16669 I love the story a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love the story a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

]]> By: Timmy 3Shttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-4/#comment-16665 Timmy 3S Sun, 25 May 2008 07:10:21 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16665 I thought that was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!! I liked the part when Jack was forced to walk the plank and I thought he was going to die but he didn't. I thought that was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!! I liked the part when Jack was forced to walk the plank and I thought he was going to die but he didn’t.

]]> By: Peter 3Rhttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-4/#comment-16663 Peter 3R Sun, 25 May 2008 06:24:11 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16663 Blow into sheeps bladder no thank you Blow into sheeps bladder no thank you

]]> By: Sydney 3Whttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-4/#comment-16660 Sydney 3W Sun, 25 May 2008 05:52:39 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16660 I am so relieved jack didn't drown. I am so relieved jack didn’t drown.

]]> By: Jennyhttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-4/#comment-16659 Jenny Sun, 25 May 2008 05:51:08 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16659 It was so exiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was so exiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

]]> By: Jennyhttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-4/#comment-16658 Jenny Sun, 25 May 2008 05:49:52 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16658 I like the part when captain Blackheart's face turns purple .It was so exiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I like the part when captain Blackheart’s face turns purple .It was so exiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

]]> By: Isarhttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-4/#comment-16640 Isar Sun, 25 May 2008 03:16:25 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16640 I like the part when Ben and Jack became friends and Jack was so brave. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I like the part when Ben and Jack became friends and Jack was so brave.
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

]]> By: krishhttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-4/#comment-16637 krish Sun, 25 May 2008 03:03:55 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16637 It was a relief when Jack and Ben came up with a plan and im glad ben risked helping Jack!!This story was very adventurous. It was a relief when Jack and Ben came up with a plan and im glad ben risked helping Jack!!This story was very adventurous.

]]> By: Revahttp://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/comment-page-4/#comment-16636 Reva Sun, 25 May 2008 02:55:43 +0000 http://storynory.com/2007/08/13/jack-and-the-pirate-school-part-5/#comment-16636 I thought the story was exciting because Jack went to the wrong school and when Jack had to walk the plank I thought Jack was going to get eaten by the sharks. Ben was a good boy because he helped Jack wash the dishes and escape to land. Captain Blackheart was a mean Captain. I thought the story was exciting because Jack went to the wrong school and when Jack had to walk the plank I thought Jack was going to get eaten by the sharks. Ben was a good boy because he helped Jack wash the dishes and escape to land. Captain Blackheart was a mean Captain.

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