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The Witch Who Was Frightened Of Halloween
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As every kid knows, Halloween is both spooky and sweet. It’s spooky because there are witches and wizards about, and it’s sweet because children go in search of treats.
This story is about a little girl who is a witch, and it’s fair to say that it’s more sweet than spooky. Her name is Katie, and her school mates think she is rather odd, and don’t really believe that she can do magic. She’s afraid of Halloween, because she thinks they will tease her more than usual, but in fact she has quite a few useful tricks and treats up her sleeve.
And while you are in witching mood, you may also enjoy a special Bertie story from our archive called Halloween on the Pond.
Read by Natasha. Duration 8.52
Once upon a time, there was a girl called Katie.
Katie was seven.
And she lived in nice house with her mum and dad, and her little brother Joey, and a dog called Muffin.
And it was all quite normal really.
Except for one thing.
They were witches.
Well, except for her Dad, who was a Wizard.
And the dog, Muffin, who was a D-witch, which is a dog who casts spells.
Anyway being a witch wasn’t so bad.
Mum would just twitch her nose and all the cleaning would get done.
Dad would wave his stick, and the lawn would cut itself.
Muffin would click his paws, and a few dog treats would tumble out of the sky.
They’d even taught Katie some magic.
She knew how to make her homework do itself.
And her room got tidied just by twitching her ear.
But there was just one thing Katie really didn’t like.
Halloween.
Once a year, when the leaves were falling off the trees, and the nights were getting longer, all the children in her school and along her street would get terribly excited about Halloween.
They made costumes of horrible looking witches.
With long pointy noses, and spots, and nasty black hats, and broomsticks.
And Katie said in school: “Witches aren’t like that, really. My mum looks quite nice.”
And all the other girls fell about laughing.
“Katie thinks she’s a witch,” they laughed. “She’s ugly and horrible, just like a witch.”
And when Katie went home that day, she was really upset.
She cried and cried and cried. And when her mum asked her what the matter was, she said: “Everyone hates witches. And they especially hate them at Halloween.”
And her mum tried to explain that although some people didn’t like witches, it was also quite useful sometimes, like when the washing up got done all by itself.
“I don’t ever want to have anything to do with witch-craft again,” said Katie angrily.
But on Halloween night, all the girls from her school were organising a trick or treat tour of the street.
And Katie didn’t want to go, because she’d decided she didn’t want to have anything to do with witch-craft.
Never, never, never….
But her mum said she had to.
Because a witch can hardly stay in on Halloween.
And she whispered something in Katie’s ear.
Do you know what it was?
Well, I’ll tell you in a minute.
Anyway, Katie went to join the other girls.
And some of them started laughing at her.
“Katie doesn’t have to dress up, because she’s already a witch,” they laughed.
And Katie felt cross.
And embarrassed.
But she decided to say nothing.
At the first house, they got a load of sherbet lemons.
At the second, a jumbo pack of sweeties.
At the third, loads and loads of crisps.
And at the forth, a giant packet of chocolate biscuits.
But at the fifth house, there lived a man called Mr Bones.
And Mr Bones didn’t like children.
He certainly didn’t see why he should give them any treats.
“Buzz off, you stupid kids,” he said when they knocked on the door.
“Trick or treat, trick, or treat…” cried the girls.
“Yes, well, I think I’ll take the trick, if it’s all the same to you,” said Mr Bones.
And a horrible smile creased up his face.
“Because you’re just a bunch of stupid little girls, and you don’t scare me.”
“But one of us is a real witch,” said Amelia, the biggest of the girls.
“Yes, yes, Katie’s a real witch,” they all cried.
But Mr Bones just laughed and laughed.
“That’s the stupidest thing I ever heard,” he said.
“Go on, Katie,” said Amelia. “Let’s see if you really are a witch.”
And so Katie stepped forwards.
“You don’t look scary to me,” said Mr Bones. “You’re just a stupid little girl.”
But Katie remembered what her mum had whispered in her ear.
Do you know what it was?
A special spell.
So right then, Katie recited the magic words.
And she wriggled her ear.
And all the girls gasped in amazement.
Because suddenly Mr Bones wasn’t Mr Bones anymore.
He was a little brown, fluffy hamster. Inside a cage. Running around and around on a wheel.
All the girls laughed and laughed.
Katie leaned into the cage. “Is it fun being a hamster?”
The little creature squeaked and shook its head.
And Katie spun the wheel, so that he had to run faster and faster.
And then she recited the magic words and Mr Bones was turned back into a man again.
“I’ll get you some treats, girls,” he said very quickly and nervously.
And he came back with tons of chocolate bars, fizzy drinks, biscuits, and even a new Barbie DVD for each girl.
“Please come back next year girls,” he said. “I’ll have even better stuff for you.”
And he went back inside, looking very nervous.
And as they went down the rest of the street, everyone had heard that there was a real witch out trick and treating tonight, so they all gave the girls even more sweets and biscuits than usual, and even some toys.
And Katie was the most popular girl in her class.
“You know, maybe it’s not so bad being a witch after all,” she said when she got home. “And I think I’m going to enjoy Halloween from now on.”
Hello
This is a great Katie story and Katie learns a lot from her aunt chloe about being a older witch with magic flying broomstick skills.
Thanks for listening
Bye Bye
N *
nice book
Hello
Thanks for your comment. Katie and Isis in this story make up a magical pumpkin dance together that you can enjoy too.
Thanks for listening
Bye Bye
N *
katie is grate
Hello
Vampires are suposedly a creation for fiction books as well as Witches and Wizards.
There are lots of Vampires about at Halloween and people like to dress up as them
Thanks for listening
Bye Bye
N *
are vampiers real
i love this story
It’s great,I really had fun reading it hope you have more stories to come.
This is a great story! Bertie, I know a website that is just like this but now it is closed! Bertie, I have a lot of questions for you!
1. How many stories do you have right now in storynory?
2. Why can’t people can’t understand animals?
3. If the king knew that the queen is a witch, why did he divorced her?
PLEASE ANSWER
Sincerely,
Superstar Diva
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Live it love it! Natasha you rock! Are you going to make more Katie stories? And can you do ones when Katie is grown up? And please right back! No one has ever written back to me!!!
Live it love it! Natasha you rock? Are you going to make more Katie stories? And can you do ones when Katie is grown up?
nice i liked it!!!!!
I wish I WAS a WITCH
Nice
I am Omar.I like tis story very much make another also too spooky.this was a great spooky story.
this story is very interesting and i luv it a lot can not wait to read the others.
It was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooooddddddddddddddddddd!
it was good good good
really interesting its the first story i ever read that is actually good!
nice story its so coll i wish could write one
text back
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awsome story so cool
Why don’t u make Katie comics too
it was a cool stoty a
Its just wonderful!
Hello
Thank you for your comment. Katie as a Witch has to embrace Halloween for it is the prime time of year for her to show off her Witch talents. There are spells to make, magic shop work and Pumpkin dances to name a few.
Listen out for the next Katie Halloween story special
Bye bye
N *
Good
A really awesome story, some day I will have magic in my finger tips ,you see if I don’t.
cool
I love all the story from Katie the witch. The one I like most is: The witch who was frightened of halloween.
great book
who is the author
Hello
Halloween is the ideal time for Katie as a young the Witch to practice using her witch spells
Most of the time at school and where ever she is, she must use her powers for good.
Thanks for listening
Bye Bye
N *
i love this story i want to be a witch
Bertie how did u turn into a frog
It’s really unusual and awesome
i just love these witch stories. its really nice.
Katie stories are escpecially special to me.
know why?
lizzie reason is exactly same as mine
Love this story.
katie is like my real friend.
I wish I had a friend like her!
I love this story!
And I love Halloween, too!
^^*
And guess what?
I love witches!
When I was even younger, I pretended to be a witch with my best friends and made strange magic spells!
We shouted the fake spells to other children, who made them a bit confused.^^*
We even pretended to drink watercolors, thinking that those were witch medicine!
I loved that story! will Katy and the which swap be a story on Storynory?
I dont belive in witchs but it was qite funny and i Hate Hallowen
Why is there only witches
I liked this story.
Dear Fernanda. Bertie (me) is the author. Magic is just for stories though.
I WANTED to be a witch!!!!
would be fantastic to have magical powers
who is the author???
ok pero porque ella es verde traduccion
ok but why she is green???
rubish
ace
it was ace could of been a bit longer
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nice story
I love it it is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooosssssssssssssssssssssooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo very ssssssssssssssoooooooooooooooooooooooooooo very ssssssssssssssssssssssoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo pretty lovely if i was a witch hum? um…………….. bertie pls. answewr my question what is better a human or a witch…………………………..???????????????
it’s a very interesting story. katie is really awesome
Hey, this is a nice story :- )
Have a nice day!
ilike the story so much it is interresting story
it is amazing series of storys about witches i realy like it so thank alot story nory
Lucy, Right Click Save AS
how do you download onto a computer
Maude, I’m hoping in a few days
when will katie and the witch swap come out?
that was avery nice story my littel sister was just loving it!!!!
The story is really very well nice, I hope my students will like it as I did!!
cool book
hello this is a long story
Katie was a witch.
I really like this story!!
IT is fun!
I want to be a with too!! >_<
I like that
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i love this story
I loved it.
i hated it
thanks for the story… it’s really nice… my students will love it !!!!!
cool story man in it
cool story man
You can give an oppurtunity for other kids to tell the story,so you can select the best and publish.Natasha, do not be sad.You have a charming sound.
that was a really good story
it is an very interesting and creative story
v.good nicley told great on my i phone
heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee !!!!!!!!!I thing this story is great for the kids i was reading for my baby sister and she loved it and also she was scared of Halloween too but i’ll wait ti’ll next year and see if she is still scared of it
DVD and poor Mr Bones glad he is back tonormal.
HEE! HAA!! HOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Poor old Mr. Bones! BARBIE DVDS?!!! I can’t believe that!!!!!!!
nyc!!! thankyouuu <33
i abosolutely luv it
aww i luv ur stories!! thanks a lot!! =D
i am going to read another story now because that one was so great i know the rest will be aswell.
i thought the story was great and i so want to be a witch now but i have to say i am not affraid of halloween.
very nice 2nd favorite story yet
My brother and i LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I think I dont like it
the story was amazing.
it was good
it was good i love
it was good
thank u so much and go on
A very nice story!!!!!!
:-) very nice
Such a sweet story
Hai i did do anader comment the adder day but it dident came upp. But back to the storry it vass realy goooooooooooooooood love me.
I’LL BE SURE TO KEEP THIS ONE FOR MY GRANDCHILDREN..
lol its comady
its a brill story
This was my favourite one yet
I like this story!!!!!
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nice story booooooooooooooo! scare the man good witch
that story was awsome make another one
We are too old for it!
It was a Awesome story!!!!!!!!
Please….I really want hamster stories.
Ashley it’s late on the pond, and I’m off to sleep, so don’t be offended if I don’t reply anymore today. But It’s lovely to hear that that you got a hampster, and I’ll try and dream up some hampster stories… but I can’t promise, because it depends on what comes into my little brain !
i just got a hamster today. Can you make hamster stories?
you are cool and amasing
I love~~ it!
THIS STORY IS COOL!
IT IS A BRILL STORY
it was a great one i have to listen to it because that what we do for school reading groups i have already heard pretty much all the stories on storynory
:) :) This story was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:):):):):):)
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it was a very cool storie but the acint did sound so cool
it is fun to read
halloween scaryyyyyyyyy it is funnn
niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee…..
loved it
this is a sweet website
Holaween Isint All That Spooky
It was good that Katie was a witch because they would be doomed
I belive in witches
the story was really good and intrestyingggggggggggggggggggggggggg !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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SO GOOD IT IS AMAZING
thats a good story a funny 1 too and its good because in my school u have too dress up as a witch from a witch story and this is the best 1 x
Sorry Ribbit Girl, magic spells are top secret
Hate it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LUCKY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Katie, you’re EXTREMELY lucky!!!!!! Do you think you could teach me something?
Dear Boo to Candy – you don’t have to like Halloween or Candy … but once a year they don’t do any harm.
i don’t like halloween or candy, rite back Bertie
:) >:( :(
I love the story! :D its fun and intresting and SHORT!
I LUV THE STORY!! SHORT AND AWSOME + ITS SHOWS THAT YOU MUST BE YOURSELF!!! THATS HOW EVERYBODY LIKES YOU!!! BE YOURSELF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I loved your story
I think it was an awsome story. I’m putting my thumbs up right now for thumbs up. Later.
Shannon, 10, VT USA
happy halloween!!!!!!!!!!!
BBBOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
so have fun on halloween
im talking to u
I love it it is so fun and interesting! good
Great story, super fun
aswemome it was cool like omg lol idk !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 siker
I like it, but it is very kiddish !!!
I liked the story because it was funny when Katie turned mr. Bones in to a hampster and witches arnt usually scared of Halloween and it was a happy ending.
it was the most fantastic thing ever!
it was brilliant!!!!!!!
november 20th 2008 thursday
It was fantastic!!!
I loved it!
This is the best story I have ever read!!
Thanks Natasha!! Archita 3G
This is a wonderful fantastic story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it was cool
it was cool
I enjoyed this very much because……
hey you are so cool how do you know that we are raising money for charity!!!!
this is the best story ever. did you know I myself am a witch. and I proud to be one.
i like this story &THZ!
It was not scary.
Its a good story but if katie’s a witch why didn’t put a spell on the others kkk
Natasha x x x x x
WHEN IT IS REALLY DARK IN HALLOWEEN KIDS GET CANDY I REALLY LIKED THE STORY THE WITCH PART WAS SCARY I GOT IT WAS A GOOD STORY.
i soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooloved that story…………………………….because im in 4th grade
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good and funnie
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I did be sooooo sleepy when read story.
I think it’s tooooooooooooooo long for a little child,like me.You may make it a bit short.But the story is really good to hear adout.Try on!Try onec and agian.
It was a good story. My favorite part is when all the girls see the hamster.
I mean really cool :D
:D Relly cool!
We loved the story. It was fun and scary. We specially liked the Mr Bones turned into a hampster.
BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!
Happy Halloween!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Such a sweet story..I love it :)
It was awsome, I realy liked it!!!
I love this creapy story!
The story gave me the chills on my spine!
great.
This is very fun story!
I’d love it!^^
That was great! Katie got a treat alright. And Mr. Bones got a trick.
ha,ha.ha
stupid
Dear storeynorey this is boring put up a new storey.
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WOW ;; That was amazing i think im looking forward to halloween already and well still In September :L
Really good book ill have to read it again;; thank you x
x ilu x
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I agree with you it is so NICE!!!!!!!
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NICE,NICE,NICE
okayyy this one is creepy
or given me the heeby jeebees
na jus kidden
ps. how do u get your
voice like that?
The story is exciting especially when Mr Bones was turned into a hamster. Haha!
It was really fun!!!
see you again Natarsha and katie!
I will visit you soon????~
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dude everybody loves this story i did 2 i guess it was 4 little kids but i enjoyed reading it 2 im 14 im in 2 more scary stuff tho this story caught my eye 4 some reason really COOL ill probly share it with my younger sibblings thanx 4 a cool story *sarah*
Hello!
I’ve met Natasha and Katie before and I am enjoying it. I hope there is a another Katie story soon. See you soon Natasha and Katie!!!
Good Bye~?
Dear Riley
We are commissioning more pictures and you will see some very soon on some of the stories. But we do have to pay for the pictures, and as our stories are free, our funds are limited. If anyone would like to sponsor some original pictures on their favourite stories we would be very happy about that.
If you are looking for stories for older children, you might try Gladys and the Chix about a girl band. The Greek myths might also appeal. But our facebook group shows that some older children enjoy storynory anyway. The fairytales for instance can be understood on all sorts of levels.
As for the TV ad, well if we had the money, we might do that. But a TV programme…. A Bertie Animation… well that would be lovely.
nohemi i agree you should but some more pictures in it or make it like a movie it would be more interesting for the yonger children like my kids they get board but they probley wouldnt if there was a vidio and you would get more people and fans on!!!
Oh and bernie you should put some older storys one for the children who are 10 to 12 my daughter would love it hey you should also post a add on t.v. too i bet youll get at least 1000 more viewers Please answer me i thank you or you can email me at rilethursty@yahoo.com
Thanx Riley
stupid
you rock.
I LIKE THE STORY PRETTY MUCH, BUT I SUGGEST: USE MORE PICTURES THAT COULD SHOW THE MAIN DETAIL OF IT. THANKYOU
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This story was funny and I had olot of connections I hadolojjuw9ojoijoiy0p0pt0o;lhpy;vt[;bot
it was great
I like this story even better than the first one about Katie.I just love stories about witches.THANK YOU VERY MUCH.
yes i like it
yes i like it
This is a great story!!:)
i love this one!!!!
:)cute story
i lyk dis story…its a real good story
i love this
i lurve it <3!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its great!!!!!!!!!!!!!<3<3<3
there are something wrong with the audio
I really like
i like~ it and i would like being a witch
I want to be a witch:)
that story really isn’t teaching a good lesson, but it’s okay.
i like this story becus eneything can happen
she can do all sorts of magic stuff but she is still normal she can get hurt feelings and
she still goes to shool and she still learns important lessons that evryone needs to learn
like you cant get evrything you want even when
you are a wich!
OMG that story rocked my socks off!!! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! WOW WOW WOW WOW!!!!!!!
LETS DO THAT AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!WoooHoooooo!!!
i luv it.
thank you all
i love it thank you ok
it was to good but fun that the wich was sarerd
it was to good but fun that the wich was sarerd
NICE STORY
This story is soo good!!! It is funny that a witch doesn’t like Halloween. They are supposed to like it.
A very interesting story!The trick is funny.Hence,I’ll like Halloween.I want there will be a witch knock at my house’s door.How fun!!
This story is the fantastical!I love how Katie wasn’t popular in the begining. that just gose to show that being yourself is the most popular thing in the world, and if knowbody in your school can see that then they don’t know what their missing. Just be yourself and you will get more friends is the lesson of this story! :)
Sincerly
MIranda Ceiri
new york, newyork the age of 10
i did not like it very much.this was very teribble reading.
This story is very interesting
That is good story , I like it so much.
i LIKE THE STORY A LOT BUT……I WONDER WHY M.R BONES WAS SO NERVOUS,WEIRD,HUH ?.Aoife
very good,I like this story.
I loved that story
it’s a good story!
I like this story!
i love that one it rocks!
it’s a good story! I like this. but, not scary.
Hi I like thr sory.
But it seems it is not scary.
Love it!Waiting for the next one!
I love that story.
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IT WAS GREAT
I can’t beleive a witch was afraid of halloween!But it was still cool story.
ME AGAIN LAST 1 THEN I AM GOING TO READ A STORY THE PART WHERE KATIE’S MUM TOLD HER JUST CUZ U ARE MADE OF DOESN’T MEaN UF UR A WITCH THAT DOESN’T MEAN U R NOT GOING TO BE IT EVER AGAIN
MONIQUE
THAT WAS GREAT I LIKED THIS STORY I AM GOING TO SAY
THAT KATIE SHOULD NO T PUT SPELLS ON PEOPLE JUST CUZ THEY ARE NOT GETTING WHAT THEY WANT LIKE MR. BONES
BUT U NEED TO USE UR POWER FOR NEEDS ONLY NOT FOR FUN AND TO GET WHAT THEY WANT MONIQUE THANK YOU NATASHA FOR THE STORY I AM GOING TO FID ANOTHER STORY THANK YOU AGAIN SO MUCH I LIKED THE STORY SO MUCH
Thanks for the story! I enjoyed it :)
it was really coooooooooooool lol it was funny when mr bones turned into a hamster annnnnnnnd does any1 here play runescape its a really cool game if u are intrested in it go on http://www.runescape.com
it was really coooooooooooool lol it was funny when mr bones turned into a hamster annnnnnnnd does any1 here play runescape its a really cool game if u are intrested in it go on http://www.runescape.com
it was really coooooooooooool lol it was funny when mr bones turned into a hamster annnnnnnnd does any1 here play runescape its a really cool game if u are intrested in it go on http://www.runescape.com
all of these stories are the most amazing,exciting,fuuny,and very interestingto me
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i love it!
the story was okay, even for me as an adult.
better than the story itself is this page!! think it is a wonderful idea to have some stories told in englis.
IT WAS VERY GOOD I HOPE YOU MAKE ANOTHER BOOK ABOUT KATIE
8) 8) 8) 8) It was like omg!!! LOL
i lol it it is omg lol ha ha lolrotflolomgjk it iscool andu shud read it ha ha p.s go to candy mounten !!!!! lol so be nicec it is cool lol read it
That was a good story and I love hamster!!!!!
it was ok…
i didn’t like it was okay because it was a little funny but i still didn’t like it
it wus omg ha ah lol lolrotfloljk i luv it it is lol jk ha ha idk
i love it it is funney lol haha
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i like it story it is funny and it is good u shde read it i love it i lafed :)
It was cool. I want to be Katie and turn Mr.Bones into a hamster!
i really liked it because i like witches & it was a great ghostly story
This is a really good story. It was really cool she turned Mr Bones into a Hamster.
I liked it…it would have been better if it had more variation in it…not just ‘they laughed and laughed’ and ‘she cried and cried and cried’
it could have been ‘they laughed and giggled’ and ‘she cried and sobbed and sniffed’
but, you cant change the story, so other then that is was OK..
This story was good. We really enjoyed listening to it!
We like the story but thought it was a little bit scary!
Thank you for the Story
You are so kind
I was very funny.
This story was ANWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love your story. I hope you make another story about Katie.
Thank you for all these stories!!! They are more than wonderfull!!!
It was okay. It would have been better if there were more sound effects.
We greatly Like this story … It is fantastic … Aconcelhamos everyone to read it …
Loved it. Waiting for the next one!!!!
i love the story a lot
i think this story is just wounderful i read it 2 younger siblings and they just love it i hope other children caRRY on to use it though i go to the local libary and i have never senn it before:)
~love the story ~ :)
there is something wrong with the audio
I love this storynory!!!!!!
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!It is great!!!!
i like the story….
i love the story very much
i like it
it geat
I’m a nanny..and my kids love to hear stories.. This one was fun!
Great to share with kids!
it was GREAT !!!
i liked it a lot. really a lot
I love this story. It’s really good!