The Witch Who Was Frightened Of Halloween

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Witch Girl As every kid knows, Halloween is both spooky and sweet. It’s spooky because there are witches and wizards about, and it’s sweet because children go in search of treats.

This story is about a little girl who is a witch, and it’s fair to say that it’s more sweet than spooky. Her name is Katie, and her school mates think she is rather odd, and don’t really believe that she can do magic. She’s afraid of Halloween, because she thinks they will tease her more than usual, but in fact she has quite a few useful tricks and treats up her sleeve.

PumpkinAnd while you are in witching mood, you may also enjoy a special Bertie story from our archive called Halloween on the Pond.

Read by Natasha. Duration 8.52

Once upon a time, there was a girl called Katie.

Katie was seven.

And she lived in nice house with her mum and dad, and her little brother Joey, and a dog called Muffin.

And it was all quite normal really.

Except for one thing.

They were witches.

Well, except for her Dad, who was a Wizard.

And the dog, Muffin, who was a D-witch, which is a dog who casts spells.

Anyway being a witch wasn’t so bad.

Mum would just twitch her nose and all the cleaning would get done.

Dad would wave his stick, and the lawn would cut itself.

Muffin would click his paws, and a few dog treats would tumble out of the sky.

They’d even taught Katie some magic.

She knew how to make her homework do itself.

And her room got tidied just by twitching her ear.

But there was just one thing Katie really didn’t like.

Halloween.

Once a year, when the leaves were falling off the trees, and the nights were getting longer, all the children in her school and along her street would get terribly excited about Halloween.

They made costumes of horrible looking witches.

With long pointy noses, and spots, and nasty black hats, and broomsticks.

And Katie said in school: “Witches aren’t like that, really. My mum looks quite nice.”

And all the other girls fell about laughing.

“Katie thinks she’s a witch,” they laughed. “She’s ugly and horrible, just like a witch.”

And when Katie went home that day, she was really upset.

She cried and cried and cried. And when her mum asked her what the matter was, she said: “Everyone hates witches. And they especially hate them at Halloween.”

And her mum tried to explain that although some people didn’t like witches, it was also quite useful sometimes, like when the washing up got done all by itself.

“I don’t ever want to have anything to do with witch-craft again,” said Katie angrily.

But on Halloween night, all the girls from her school were organising a trick or treat tour of the street.

And Katie didn’t want to go, because she’d decided she didn’t want to have anything to do with witch-craft.

Never, never, never….

But her mum said she had to.

Because a witch can hardly stay in on Halloween.

And she whispered something in Katie’s ear.

Do you know what it was?

Well, I’ll tell you in a minute.

Anyway, Katie went to join the other girls.

And some of them started laughing at her.

“Katie doesn’t have to dress up, because she’s already a witch,” they laughed.

And Katie felt cross.

And embarrassed.

But she decided to say nothing.

At the first house, they got a load of sherbet lemons.

At the second, a jumbo pack of sweeties.

At the third, loads and loads of crisps.

And at the forth, a giant packet of chocolate biscuits.

But at the fifth house, there lived a man called Mr Bones.

And Mr Bones didn’t like children.

He certainly didn’t see why he should give them any treats.

“Buzz off, you stupid kids,” he said when they knocked on the door.

“Trick or treat, trick, or treat…” cried the girls.

“Yes, well, I think I’ll take the trick, if it’s all the same to you,” said Mr Bones.

And a horrible smile creased up his face.

“Because you’re just a bunch of stupid little girls, and you don’t scare me.”

“But one of us is a real witch,” said Amelia, the biggest of the girls.

“Yes, yes, Katie’s a real witch,” they all cried.

But Mr Bones just laughed and laughed.

“That’s the stupidest thing I ever heard,” he said.

“Go on, Katie,” said Amelia. “Let’s see if you really are a witch.”

And so Katie stepped forwards.

“You don’t look scary to me,” said Mr Bones. “You’re just a stupid little girl.”

But Katie remembered what her mum had whispered in her ear.

Do you know what it was?

A special spell.

So right then, Katie recited the magic words.

And she wriggled her ear.

And all the girls gasped in amazement.

Because suddenly Mr Bones wasn’t Mr Bones anymore.

He was a little brown, fluffy hamster. Inside a cage. Running around and around on a wheel.

All the girls laughed and laughed.

Katie leaned into the cage. “Is it fun being a hamster?”

The little creature squeaked and shook its head.

And Katie spun the wheel, so that he had to run faster and faster.

And then she recited the magic words and Mr Bones was turned back into a man again.

“I’ll get you some treats, girls,” he said very quickly and nervously.

And he came back with tons of chocolate bars, fizzy drinks, biscuits, and even a new Barbie DVD for each girl.

“Please come back next year girls,” he said. “I’ll have even better stuff for you.”

And he went back inside, looking very nervous.

And as they went down the rest of the street, everyone had heard that there was a real witch out trick and treating tonight, so they all gave the girls even more sweets and biscuits than usual, and even some toys.

And Katie was the most popular girl in her class.

“You know, maybe it’s not so bad being a witch after all,” she said when she got home. “And I think I’m going to enjoy Halloween from now on.”

Stories in this series.

  1. The Witch Who Was Frightened Of Halloween
  2. The Witch Who Got into Trouble at School
  3. The Nose That Ran Away
  4. The Valentine Witch
  5. The Witch Who Lost Her Spells
  6. The Wizard Who Stole Katie's Spells

196 Comments

  • Mollie
    Posted October 14, 2007 at 8:30 pm | Permalink

    I love this story. It’s really good!

  • Anonymous
    Posted October 15, 2007 at 10:39 am | Permalink

    i liked it a lot. really a lot

  • no name
    Posted October 15, 2007 at 10:46 am | Permalink

    it was GREAT !!!

  • Shyrle
    Posted October 16, 2007 at 12:14 am | Permalink

    I’m a nanny..and my kids love to hear stories.. This one was fun!
    Great to share with kids!

  • miguel
    Posted October 16, 2007 at 4:00 pm | Permalink

    it geat

  • cary
    Posted October 16, 2007 at 4:11 pm | Permalink

    i like it

  • zamantha
    Posted October 18, 2007 at 3:43 am | Permalink

    i love the story very much

  • maja
    Posted October 18, 2007 at 3:48 am | Permalink

    i like the story….

  • Anonymous
    Posted October 18, 2007 at 7:25 pm | Permalink

    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!It is great!!!!

  • maja
    Posted October 18, 2007 at 7:26 pm | Permalink

    I love this storynory!!!!!!

  • link
    Posted October 19, 2007 at 1:43 pm | Permalink

    there is something wrong with the audio

  • princess keyah
    Posted October 20, 2007 at 7:55 pm | Permalink

    ~love the story ~ :)

  • no name here
    Posted October 20, 2007 at 7:59 pm | Permalink

    i think this story is just wounderful i read it 2 younger siblings and they just love it i hope other children caRRY on to use it though i go to the local libary and i have never senn it before:)

  • adrienna
    Posted October 21, 2007 at 4:24 pm | Permalink

    i love the story a lot

  • Spooky
    Posted October 23, 2007 at 11:16 pm | Permalink

    Loved it. Waiting for the next one!!!!

  • Sara&Adriana
    Posted October 26, 2007 at 10:05 am | Permalink

    We greatly Like this story … It is fantastic … Aconcelhamos everyone to read it …

  • Ms. Jones' class
    Posted October 26, 2007 at 4:36 pm | Permalink

    It was okay. It would have been better if there were more sound effects.

  • elena
    Posted October 28, 2007 at 5:24 pm | Permalink

    Thank you for all these stories!!! They are more than wonderfull!!!

  • Janette
    Posted October 29, 2007 at 11:35 pm | Permalink

    I love your story. I hope you make another story about Katie.

  • Joy
    Posted October 30, 2007 at 3:29 pm | Permalink

    This story was ANWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Mailinkai
    Posted October 30, 2007 at 9:15 pm | Permalink

    I was very funny.

  • children from British school
    Posted October 31, 2007 at 3:05 am | Permalink

    We like the story but thought it was a little bit scary!
    Thank you for the Story
    You are so kind

  • Ms. Davis' Class
    Posted October 31, 2007 at 3:45 pm | Permalink

    This story was good. We really enjoyed listening to it!

  • abby
    Posted November 1, 2007 at 3:55 pm | Permalink

    I liked it…it would have been better if it had more variation in it…not just ‘they laughed and laughed’ and ’she cried and cried and cried’

    it could have been ‘they laughed and giggled’ and ’she cried and sobbed and sniffed’

    but, you cant change the story, so other then that is was OK..

  • Ms. Jones class
    Posted November 1, 2007 at 7:53 pm | Permalink

    This is a really good story. It was really cool she turned Mr Bones into a Hamster.

  • swapnil
    Posted November 2, 2007 at 11:11 am | Permalink

    i really liked it because i like witches & it was a great ghostly story

  • Lee
    Posted November 5, 2007 at 10:52 am | Permalink

    It was cool. I want to be Katie and turn Mr.Bones into a hamster!

  • savannah
    Posted November 6, 2007 at 6:17 pm | Permalink

    i like it story it is funny and it is good u shde read it i love it i lafed :)

  • savanah
    Posted November 6, 2007 at 6:18 pm | Permalink

    i love it it is funney lol haha

    ;0

  • savannah !!!!! M
    Posted November 6, 2007 at 6:21 pm | Permalink

    it wus omg ha ah lol lolrotfloljk i luv it it is lol jk ha ha idk

  • type name here
    Posted November 6, 2007 at 6:23 pm | Permalink

    i didn’t like it was okay because it was a little funny but i still didn’t like it

  • Danielle
    Posted November 6, 2007 at 6:23 pm | Permalink

    it was ok…

  • Alyssa
    Posted November 6, 2007 at 6:24 pm | Permalink

    That was a good story and I love hamster!!!!!

  • savannah !!m :)
    Posted November 6, 2007 at 6:25 pm | Permalink

    i lol it it is omg lol ha ha lolrotflolomgjk it iscool andu shud read it ha ha p.s go to candy mounten !!!!! lol so be nicec it is cool lol read it

  • Alyssa
    Posted November 6, 2007 at 6:26 pm | Permalink

    8) 8) 8) 8) It was like omg!!! LOL

  • freavv
    Posted November 9, 2007 at 1:45 am | Permalink

    IT WAS VERY GOOD I HOPE YOU MAKE ANOTHER BOOK ABOUT KATIE

  • ME ;-)
    Posted November 9, 2007 at 3:34 pm | Permalink

    the story was okay, even for me as an adult.

    better than the story itself is this page!! think it is a wonderful idea to have some stories told in englis.

  • indigo
    Posted November 9, 2007 at 6:57 pm | Permalink

    i love it!

  • heather
    Posted November 10, 2007 at 10:02 pm | Permalink

    all of these stories are the most amazing,exciting,fuuny,and very interestingto me

    from heather grimes

  • princess aminah
    Posted November 16, 2007 at 2:55 pm | Permalink

    it was really coooooooooooool lol it was funny when mr bones turned into a hamster annnnnnnnd does any1 here play runescape its a really cool game if u are intrested in it go on http://www.runescape.com

  • aminah
    Posted November 16, 2007 at 2:55 pm | Permalink

    it was really coooooooooooool lol it was funny when mr bones turned into a hamster annnnnnnnd does any1 here play runescape its a really cool game if u are intrested in it go on http://www.runescape.com

  • aminah
    Posted November 16, 2007 at 2:55 pm | Permalink

    it was really coooooooooooool lol it was funny when mr bones turned into a hamster annnnnnnnd does any1 here play runescape its a really cool game if u are intrested in it go on http://www.runescape.com

  • Elizabeth6
    Posted December 2, 2007 at 6:29 am | Permalink

    Thanks for the story! I enjoyed it :)

  • MONIQUE
    Posted January 1, 2008 at 1:40 am | Permalink

    THAT WAS GREAT I LIKED THIS STORY I AM GOING TO SAY
    THAT KATIE SHOULD NO T PUT SPELLS ON PEOPLE JUST CUZ THEY ARE NOT GETTING WHAT THEY WANT LIKE MR. BONES
    BUT U NEED TO USE UR POWER FOR NEEDS ONLY NOT FOR FUN AND TO GET WHAT THEY WANT MONIQUE THANK YOU NATASHA FOR THE STORY I AM GOING TO FID ANOTHER STORY THANK YOU AGAIN SO MUCH I LIKED THE STORY SO MUCH

  • MONIQUE
    Posted January 1, 2008 at 1:42 am | Permalink

    ME AGAIN LAST 1 THEN I AM GOING TO READ A STORY THE PART WHERE KATIE’S MUM TOLD HER JUST CUZ U ARE MADE OF DOESN’T MEaN UF UR A WITCH THAT DOESN’T MEAN U R NOT GOING TO BE IT EVER AGAIN

    MONIQUE

  • Adriana
    Posted January 4, 2008 at 11:19 pm | Permalink

    I can’t beleive a witch was afraid of halloween!But it was still cool story.

  • Lucy
    Posted January 7, 2008 at 12:36 am | Permalink

    IT WAS GREAT

  • bill
    Posted January 11, 2008 at 6:05 pm | Permalink

    great story whi do so many schools, classes and groups leave comments?

    anyway check out my podcast at
    http://www.talkshoe.com/tc/38744

  • Anonymous
    Posted January 17, 2008 at 9:38 pm | Permalink

    I love that story.

  • BunnyBoo
    Posted January 17, 2008 at 9:39 pm | Permalink

    Love it!Waiting for the next one!

  • Praneeeth
    Posted February 4, 2008 at 5:26 pm | Permalink

    Hi I like thr sory.
    But it seems it is not scary.

  • wilda
    Posted February 17, 2008 at 9:46 am | Permalink

    it’s a good story! I like this. but, not scary.

  • julie
    Posted March 1, 2008 at 1:21 am | Permalink

    i love that one it rocks!

  • akshay
    Posted March 6, 2008 at 10:33 am | Permalink

    I like this story!

  • akshay
    Posted March 6, 2008 at 10:35 am | Permalink

    it’s a good story!

  • zoe
    Posted March 21, 2008 at 7:23 pm | Permalink

    I loved that story

  • dream
    Posted March 23, 2008 at 1:55 am | Permalink

    very good,I like this story.

  • aOiFE
    Posted March 26, 2008 at 11:57 am | Permalink

    i LIKE THE STORY A LOT BUT……I WONDER WHY M.R BONES WAS SO NERVOUS,WEIRD,HUH ?.Aoife

  • ahmed al fahad
    Posted March 27, 2008 at 2:03 pm | Permalink

    That is good story , I like it so much.

  • zhaoyuwen
    Posted March 30, 2008 at 7:50 am | Permalink

    This story is very interesting

  • allison
    Posted April 1, 2008 at 11:56 am | Permalink

    i did not like it very much.this was very teribble reading.

  • mynameisinthereading
    Posted April 30, 2008 at 1:53 pm | Permalink

    This story is the fantastical!I love how Katie wasn’t popular in the begining. that just gose to show that being yourself is the most popular thing in the world, and if knowbody in your school can see that then they don’t know what their missing. Just be yourself and you will get more friends is the lesson of this story! :)

    Sincerly
    MIranda Ceiri
    new york, newyork the age of 10

  • Kiven
    Posted May 4, 2008 at 11:57 am | Permalink

    A very interesting story!The trick is funny.Hence,I’ll like Halloween.I want there will be a witch knock at my house’s door.How fun!!

  • Grace
    Posted May 6, 2008 at 11:50 pm | Permalink

    This story is soo good!!! It is funny that a witch doesn’t like Halloween. They are supposed to like it.

  • Chri$tian
    Posted May 20, 2008 at 5:59 pm | Permalink

    NICE STORY

  • bunny boo
    Posted May 22, 2008 at 2:11 pm | Permalink

    it was to good but fun that the wich was sarerd

  • bunny boo
    Posted May 22, 2008 at 2:11 pm | Permalink

    it was to good but fun that the wich was sarerd

  • bunny boo 1
    Posted May 22, 2008 at 2:16 pm | Permalink

    i love it thank you ok

  • Posted May 24, 2008 at 1:36 am | Permalink

    thank you all

  • mimzy
    Posted June 1, 2008 at 2:38 am | Permalink

    i luv it.

  • Hannah
    Posted June 8, 2008 at 12:36 pm | Permalink

    OMG that story rocked my socks off!!! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! WOW WOW WOW WOW!!!!!!!
    LETS DO THAT AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!WoooHoooooo!!!

  • molly
    Posted June 18, 2008 at 9:57 pm | Permalink

    i like this story becus eneything can happen
    she can do all sorts of magic stuff but she is still normal she can get hurt feelings and
    she still goes to shool and she still learns important lessons that evryone needs to learn
    like you cant get evrything you want even when
    you are a wich!

  • annabelle
    Posted June 24, 2008 at 7:12 pm | Permalink

    that story really isn’t teaching a good lesson, but it’s okay.

  • Ameli
    Posted July 5, 2008 at 5:48 pm | Permalink

    I want to be a witch:)

  • daniela
    Posted July 11, 2008 at 8:17 pm | Permalink

    i like~ it and i would like being a witch

  • megan
    Posted July 18, 2008 at 2:49 pm | Permalink

    I really like

  • Erica
    Posted August 9, 2008 at 4:26 am | Permalink

    there are something wrong with the audio

  • Anonymous
    Posted August 14, 2008 at 12:42 pm | Permalink

    i lurve it <3!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its great!!!!!!!!!!!!!<3<3<3

  • raylynn
    Posted August 19, 2008 at 1:33 pm | Permalink

    i love this

  • Sadies
    Posted August 19, 2008 at 4:42 pm | Permalink

    i lyk dis story…its a real good story

  • alexis
    Posted August 19, 2008 at 4:44 pm | Permalink

    :) cute story

  • ~~~raylynn~~~
    Posted August 20, 2008 at 1:09 pm | Permalink

    i love this one!!!!

  • Heather:)
    Posted August 20, 2008 at 1:11 pm | Permalink

    This is a great story!!:)

  • tt
    Posted August 20, 2008 at 3:00 pm | Permalink

    yes i like it

  • Posted August 20, 2008 at 3:01 pm | Permalink

    yes i like it

  • Pretty Princess
    Posted August 21, 2008 at 10:53 am | Permalink

    I like this story even better than the first one about Katie.I just love stories about witches.THANK YOU VERY MUCH.

  • caitlin
    Posted August 21, 2008 at 1:12 pm | Permalink

    it was great

  • Christopher
    Posted September 9, 2008 at 1:46 pm | Permalink

    This story was funny and I had olot of connections I hadolojjuw9ojoijoiy0p0pt0o;lhpy;vt[;bot

  • Anonymous
    Posted September 9, 2008 at 4:38 pm | Permalink

    tha

  • NOHEMI
    Posted September 10, 2008 at 1:55 am | Permalink

    I LIKE THE STORY PRETTY MUCH, BUT I SUGGEST: USE MORE PICTURES THAT COULD SHOW THE MAIN DETAIL OF IT. THANKYOU

  • jasmin
    Posted September 11, 2008 at 2:48 am | Permalink

    you rock.

  • Anonymous
    Posted September 11, 2008 at 2:50 am | Permalink

    stupid

  • Posted September 13, 2008 at 2:33 am | Permalink

    nohemi i agree you should but some more pictures in it or make it like a movie it would be more interesting for the yonger children like my kids they get board but they probley wouldnt if there was a vidio and you would get more people and fans on!!!
    Oh and bernie you should put some older storys one for the children who are 10 to 12 my daughter would love it hey you should also post a add on t.v. too i bet youll get at least 1000 more viewers Please answer me i thank you or you can email me at rilethursty@yahoo.com
    Thanx Riley

  • Posted September 13, 2008 at 6:36 am | Permalink

    Dear Riley

    We are commissioning more pictures and you will see some very soon on some of the stories. But we do have to pay for the pictures, and as our stories are free, our funds are limited. If anyone would like to sponsor some original pictures on their favourite stories we would be very happy about that.

    If you are looking for stories for older children, you might try Gladys and the Chix about a girl band. The Greek myths might also appeal. But our facebook group shows that some older children enjoy storynory anyway. The fairytales for instance can be understood on all sorts of levels.

    As for the TV ad, well if we had the money, we might do that. But a TV programme…. A Bertie Animation… well that would be lovely.

  • Christina
    Posted September 16, 2008 at 5:36 am | Permalink

    Hello!
    I’ve met Natasha and Katie before and I am enjoying it. I hope there is a another Katie story soon. See you soon Natasha and Katie!!!
    Good Bye~♡

  • sarah
    Posted September 18, 2008 at 5:10 pm | Permalink

    dude everybody loves this story i did 2 i guess it was 4 little kids but i enjoyed reading it 2 im 14 im in 2 more scary stuff tho this story caught my eye 4 some reason really COOL ill probly share it with my younger sibblings thanx 4 a cool story *sarah*

  • Christina
    Posted September 20, 2008 at 9:53 am | Permalink

    It was really fun!!!
    see you again Natarsha and katie!
    I will visit you soon????~
    ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooookkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk??
    Ok???

  • Posted September 20, 2008 at 11:29 pm | Permalink

    The story is exciting especially when Mr Bones was turned into a hamster. Haha!

  • Posted September 23, 2008 at 1:56 pm | Permalink

    okayyy this one is creepy
    or given me the heeby jeebees
    na jus kidden

    ps. how do u get your
    voice like that?

  • Anonymous
    Posted September 23, 2008 at 1:59 pm | Permalink

    NICE,NICE,NICE

  • Posted September 27, 2008 at 8:34 pm | Permalink

    I agree with you it is so NICE!!!!!!!

    Jemma

    English

  • Posted September 27, 2008 at 8:39 pm | Permalink

    Anyone for tea and biscits…….

    HAHAHAHAHAHA

    Jemma English

  • Posted September 27, 2008 at 8:44 pm | Permalink

    OH THANKS, YOU ARE REALLY FUNNY JEMMA ENGLISH

    WHY YOU CAN JOIN MY CLUB I LIVE 44 BINLEY AVE AND IT IS FOR 1O 2 13.

    ANONYMOUS

  • Anonymous
    Posted September 28, 2008 at 2:06 pm | Permalink

    WOW ;; That was amazing i think im looking forward to halloween already and well still In September :L

    Really good book ill have to read it again;; thank you x

    x ilu x

  • Posted October 7, 2008 at 1:27 pm | Permalink

    Dear storeynorey this is boring put up a new storey.
    THANK YOU BEY……………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………………………..?

  • Posted October 7, 2008 at 1:35 pm | Permalink

    stupid

  • Posted October 7, 2008 at 1:41 pm | Permalink

    ha,ha.ha

  • Jacob
    Posted October 7, 2008 at 2:51 pm | Permalink

    That was great! Katie got a treat alright. And Mr. Bones got a trick.

  • Chaeyeon
    Posted October 9, 2008 at 9:47 am | Permalink

    This is very fun story!
    I’d love it!^^

  • Anonymous
    Posted October 9, 2008 at 1:04 pm | Permalink

    great.

  • blue soul 10
    Posted October 10, 2008 at 3:55 pm | Permalink

    The story gave me the chills on my spine!

  • Hi
    Posted October 10, 2008 at 3:55 pm | Permalink

    I love this creapy story!

  • Arman
    Posted October 12, 2008 at 2:23 am | Permalink

    It was awsome, I realy liked it!!!

  • IkiFreaky
    Posted October 12, 2008 at 9:14 am | Permalink

    Such a sweet story..I love it :)

  • Lalo and Pau
    Posted October 12, 2008 at 1:31 pm | Permalink

    We loved the story. It was fun and scary. We specially liked the Mr Bones turned into a hampster.
    BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!
    Happy Halloween!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • James
    Posted October 13, 2008 at 6:59 pm | Permalink

    :D Relly cool!

  • James
    Posted October 13, 2008 at 7:00 pm | Permalink

    I mean really cool :D

  • Hazal
    Posted October 19, 2008 at 2:14 pm | Permalink

    It was a good story. My favorite part is when all the girls see the hamster.

  • Angela
    Posted October 20, 2008 at 6:13 am | Permalink

    I think it’s tooooooooooooooo long for a little child,like me.You may make it a bit short.But the story is really good to hear adout.Try on!Try onec and agian.

  • Nacy
    Posted October 20, 2008 at 6:15 am | Permalink

    I did be sooooo sleepy when read story.

  • megan
    Posted October 21, 2008 at 5:58 pm | Permalink

    good and funnie

    oooooooooooooooooooooooooookkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

  • Posted October 22, 2008 at 12:41 pm | Permalink

    cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooolllllllllllllllllllllllllll

  • alexis
    Posted October 27, 2008 at 8:56 pm | Permalink

    i soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooloved that story…………………………….because im in 4th grade

  • LIZETTE
    Posted October 29, 2008 at 4:40 pm | Permalink

    WHEN IT IS REALLY DARK IN HALLOWEEN KIDS GET CANDY I REALLY LIKED THE STORY THE WITCH PART WAS SCARY I GOT IT WAS A GOOD STORY.

  • Natasha
    Posted October 30, 2008 at 3:32 pm | Permalink

    Its a good story but if katie’s a witch why didn’t put a spell on the others kkk

    Natasha x x x x x

  • Milly
    Posted November 1, 2008 at 12:48 pm | Permalink

    It was not scary.

  • YUKO
    Posted November 5, 2008 at 3:36 pm | Permalink

    i like this story &THZ!

  • safia
    Posted November 9, 2008 at 1:48 am | Permalink

    this is the best story ever. did you know I myself am a witch. and I proud to be one.

  • lucy
    Posted November 19, 2008 at 9:29 pm | Permalink

    hey you are so cool how do you know that we are raising money for charity!!!!

  • Mrs Grainger 3G
    Posted November 20, 2008 at 4:45 am | Permalink

    I enjoyed this very much because……

  • Posted November 20, 2008 at 7:15 am | Permalink

    it was cool

  • Siraajam
    Posted November 20, 2008 at 7:20 am | Permalink

    it was cool

  • Amy 3G
    Posted November 20, 2008 at 7:29 am | Permalink

    This is a wonderful fantastic story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Archita
    Posted November 20, 2008 at 8:09 am | Permalink

    november 20th 2008 thursday

    It was fantastic!!!

    I loved it!
    This is the best story I have ever read!!

    Thanks Natasha!! Archita 3G

  • Cian 3G
    Posted November 20, 2008 at 11:41 am | Permalink

    it was brilliant!!!!!!!

  • mihir 3g
    Posted November 22, 2008 at 5:42 am | Permalink

    it was the most fantastic thing ever!

  • Jeremy 3g
    Posted November 22, 2008 at 10:57 am | Permalink

    I liked the story because it was funny when Katie turned mr. Bones in to a hampster and witches arnt usually scared of Halloween and it was a happy ending.

  • Posted November 28, 2008 at 10:40 am | Permalink

    I like it, but it is very kiddish !!!

  • luis and ana cooment
    Posted December 6, 2008 at 9:09 pm | Permalink

    aswemome it was cool like omg lol idk !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 siker

  • Pie
    Posted December 11, 2008 at 10:58 am | Permalink

    Great story, super fun

  • Anonymous
    Posted December 11, 2008 at 11:00 am | Permalink

    I love it it is so fun and interesting! good

  • lily
    Posted December 26, 2008 at 9:48 pm | Permalink

    happy halloween!!!!!!!!!!!

    BBBOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    so have fun on halloween

    im talking to u

  • Shannon
    Posted January 3, 2009 at 3:36 am | Permalink

    I think it was an awsome story. I’m putting my thumbs up right now for thumbs up. Later.

    Shannon, 10, VT USA

  • bella
    Posted January 3, 2009 at 6:06 am | Permalink

    I loved your story

  • Vivien
    Posted January 18, 2009 at 5:50 pm | Permalink

    I LUV THE STORY!! SHORT AND AWSOME + ITS SHOWS THAT YOU MUST BE YOURSELF!!! THATS HOW EVERYBODY LIKES YOU!!! BE YOURSELF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Dyuthi
    Posted February 1, 2009 at 3:51 pm | Permalink

    I love the story! :D its fun and intresting and SHORT!

  • Dyuthi
    Posted February 1, 2009 at 3:52 pm | Permalink

    :) >:( :(

  • boo to candy
    Posted February 12, 2009 at 4:36 am | Permalink

    i don’t like halloween or candy, rite back Bertie

  • Posted February 12, 2009 at 9:33 am | Permalink

    Dear Boo to Candy – you don’t have to like Halloween or Candy … but once a year they don’t do any harm.

  • Ribbit Girl
    Posted February 17, 2009 at 12:43 am | Permalink

    Katie, you’re EXTREMELY lucky!!!!!! Do you think you could teach me something?

  • FROG GIRL
    Posted February 17, 2009 at 12:48 am | Permalink

    LUCKY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Who am I?
    Posted February 17, 2009 at 1:07 am | Permalink

    Hate it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Posted February 17, 2009 at 6:51 am | Permalink

    Sorry Ribbit Girl, magic spells are top secret

  • Georgia Davis
    Posted March 3, 2009 at 6:15 pm | Permalink

    thats a good story a funny 1 too and its good because in my school u have too dress up as a witch from a witch story and this is the best 1 x

  • NAME
    Posted March 4, 2009 at 11:42 am | Permalink

    SO GOOD IT IS AMAZING

  • spongbob.s.p
    Posted March 12, 2009 at 9:39 pm | Permalink

    cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooolllllllllllllllllllll

  • harishreya
    Posted March 16, 2009 at 12:28 pm | Permalink

    the story was really good and intrestyingggggggggggggggggggggggggg !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Charlie
    Posted March 23, 2009 at 3:04 am | Permalink

    I belive in witches

  • Charlie
    Posted April 6, 2009 at 2:47 pm | Permalink

    It was good that Katie was a witch because they would be doomed

  • Posted April 6, 2009 at 5:23 pm | Permalink

    Holaween Isint All That Spooky

  • Posted April 10, 2009 at 11:12 pm | Permalink

    this is a sweet website

  • anonamas
    Posted May 4, 2009 at 6:32 am | Permalink

    loved it

  • bosama
    Posted May 5, 2009 at 2:26 am | Permalink

    niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee…..

  • Posted June 2, 2009 at 4:12 pm | Permalink

    halloween scaryyyyyyyyy it is funnn

  • Posted June 2, 2009 at 4:14 pm | Permalink

    it is fun to read

  • glenda
    Posted July 21, 2009 at 12:23 am | Permalink

    it was a very cool storie but the acint did sound so cool

  • armaan
    Posted July 29, 2009 at 1:55 am | Permalink

    AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • stephanie
    Posted August 12, 2009 at 2:03 pm | Permalink

    thats what mr bones get greatttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt

  • Inayah
    Posted August 15, 2009 at 1:29 am | Permalink

    :) :) This story was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    :) :):):):):)

  • bethany
    Posted August 20, 2009 at 9:32 am | Permalink

    it was a great one i have to listen to it because that what we do for school reading groups i have already heard pretty much all the stories on storynory

  • LULU
    Posted August 28, 2009 at 12:23 pm | Permalink

    THIS STORY IS COOL!
    IT IS A BRILL STORY

  • Michelle^^
    Posted September 7, 2009 at 7:58 am | Permalink

    I love~~ it!

  • Posted October 6, 2009 at 6:41 pm | Permalink

    you are cool and amasing

  • Ashley Z.
    Posted October 17, 2009 at 11:49 pm | Permalink

    i just got a hamster today. Can you make hamster stories?

  • Posted October 18, 2009 at 12:00 am | Permalink

    Ashley it’s late on the pond, and I’m off to sleep, so don’t be offended if I don’t reply anymore today. But It’s lovely to hear that that you got a hampster, and I’ll try and dream up some hampster stories… but I can’t promise, because it depends on what comes into my little brain !

  • Ashley Z.
    Posted October 18, 2009 at 11:07 pm | Permalink

    Please….I really want hamster stories.

  • Amy
    Posted October 19, 2009 at 5:20 pm | Permalink

    It was a Awesome story!!!!!!!!

  • 6. C
    Posted October 22, 2009 at 10:17 am | Permalink

    We are too old for it!

  • PIGGY MAMA
    Posted October 26, 2009 at 9:01 pm | Permalink

    that story was awsome make another one

  • nyawargak
    Posted October 26, 2009 at 9:04 pm | Permalink

    nice story booooooooooooooo! scare the man good witch

  • PIGGY MAMA
    Posted October 26, 2009 at 9:12 pm | Permalink

    I WOULD LOVE TO MEET U .I HAVE ALWAYS WANTED TO MEET A FAMOUS PERSON. $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$

  • crazy girl
    Posted October 27, 2009 at 10:22 pm | Permalink

    I like this story!!!!!

  • Hayley
    Posted October 29, 2009 at 6:08 am | Permalink

    This was my favourite one yet

  • Posted October 29, 2009 at 1:49 pm | Permalink

    lol its comady
    its a brill story

  • JOAN
    Posted October 31, 2009 at 2:48 pm | Permalink

    I’LL BE SURE TO KEEP THIS ONE FOR MY GRANDCHILDREN..

  • ol kv. memememe.mmee
    Posted November 1, 2009 at 8:07 pm | Permalink

    Hai i did do anader comment the adder day but it dident came upp. But back to the storry it vass realy goooooooooooooooood love me.

  • Vatrix
    Posted November 2, 2009 at 4:22 pm | Permalink

    Such a sweet story

  • Evi
    Posted November 2, 2009 at 7:13 pm | Permalink

    A very nice story!!!!!!

    :-) very nice

  • lili
    Posted November 14, 2009 at 8:44 pm | Permalink

    thank u so much and go on

  • Anonymous
    Posted December 7, 2009 at 4:50 am | Permalink

    it was good

  • thouheed
    Posted December 7, 2009 at 4:53 am | Permalink

    it was good i love

  • nadeem
    Posted December 7, 2009 at 2:56 pm | Permalink

    it was good

  • alaa
    Posted January 17, 2010 at 1:23 pm | Permalink

    the story was amazing.

  • xfcghsdth
    Posted January 17, 2010 at 9:48 pm | Permalink

    I think I dont like it

  • Natalie
    Posted February 5, 2010 at 3:58 am | Permalink

    My brother and i LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • abie
    Posted February 25, 2010 at 10:56 pm | Permalink

    very nice 2nd favorite story yet

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