The Valentine Witch

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Valentine Witch This is a story about Katie who is an ordinary girl apart from one thing – she’s a witch. (More Katie stories are here).

One year at school, Katie’s form teacher was especially moody and grumpy. When Valentine’s Day was coming up, Katie and her friend Isis hatched a plan to make her teacher fall in love so that she would be “dancing on air” and in a good mood.

But Katie discovers that True Love must come from the heart, not from a magic spell.

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Read by Natasha. Duration 17 Minutes. Story by Bertie.

Katie went to a nice school where most of the teachers were kind, but some of them were quite strict, and all of them could be moody and grumpy at times, just like anyone else can be. Unfortunately, Katie’s form teacher was more grumpy and more moody than most, and more often. She was the only teacher in the whole school who the children hadn’t given a nick name to. For instance, Mr. Philpots was known as Potty, which seemed to suit him quite well. Mrs. Woodruff was called dandruff, and Miss. Tidy was called Untidy because she was.

Katie’s teacher was called Miss. Vile. That was her real name. So she didn’t have a nickname, because quite frankly, she didn’t need one.

“Katie ! ” she said on morning, “This homework looks like it was done in about five minutes. You know that you are meant to spend at least half an hour on it. You will stay in at playtime and do it again. ”

“Katie ! ” she said another time, “Those tights are not regulation school uniform. I will call your mother, she must take you home, and you must change them.”

“And Katie ! ” she said yet another time, “Stop muttering to yourself. You know that magic spells are against the school rules.”

When anybody misbehaved Miss. Vile wrote their names up on a board called “The Wall of Shame”. Everyone’s name was on it, except for Samantha’s and Matthew’s, because they were both goody-two-shoes who never did anything wrong. But Katie’s name was written on The Wall of Shame more than anybody else’s. In fact, it was written right at the top of the board in large red letters with ten exclamation marks after it.

Katie didn’t feel ashamed. But she did feel cross because it wasn’t fair.

It was the end of January. Katie’s form was learning about the Chinese New Year, and how each year is named after an animal. Miss Vile asked Katie what was her Chinese symbol, and she said that she was born in the Year of the Cat, and then Miss Vile told her that that was impossible, because there wasn’t a Year of  the Cat, and Katie said.

“It’s possible for me because I’m a witch, and all witches are born in the Year of the Cat.”

And the whole class laughed, but Isis said, “That’s right Miss. Vile. Katie’s different because she is a witch.”

“What utter clap-trap!” exclaimed Miss Vile. “I’ve told you before not to talk nonsense about magic and witches. You will  go and see the head teacher right now ! Both of YOU ! And take this note with you to explain all about your naughtiness !”

And while Katie and Isis were waiting to see the head teacher, they both felt very sad and wondered what they could do about Miss. Vile.

“Couldn’t you turn her into a toad or something?” asked Isis. But Katie shook her head. If Miss vile suddenly turned up to school one day as a toad, everyone would know who was to blame, and Katie would be in a huge heap of trouble. She might even get expelled for turning a teacher into a toad.

And then the Head Teacher called Katie and Isis into her study. She read the note, and shook her head. But she wasn’t too cross, because she knew all about Katie.

“I know that you are a bit different, ” she said to Katie, “and that you can do all sorts of magic spells, but it’s best not to mention it to anybody, OK? Somethings are best kept a secret. Now go back to your lessons both of you. ”

Katie and Isis didn’t see much point in hurrying back to the class, and so they both sat in the cloak room and talked over the problem of Miss. Vile.

“Well if you can’t turn her into something horrid, maybe you can turn her into something nice,” said Isis.

And Katie thought about this. But she couldn’t imagine Miss Vile being anything nice, and  she thought that the magic wouldn’t work.

“I’ve got it ! ” said Isis. “It will be Valentine’s Day soon. Why don’t you make her fall in love ! Grown-ups are always in a happy mood when they are in love, and she’ll be nice and kind to us.”

Katie thought that was a brilliant idea, because Witches know all sorts of magic spells for making people fall in love. But there was only one question. Who with?

“Why with Potty of course, ” said Isis, “He hasn’t got a wife. Why don’t you make him send her flowers and chocolate, and then she’ll be dancing on air.”

Katie and Isis both had a fit of giggles, and when they got back to class everyone wondered why they were both looking so happy after a visit to the Head Teacher’s study.

At home that evening, Katie opened up her mother’s book of spells and turned the pages to “L” for Love. There were loads and loads of spells, but some of them were a bit impractical. For instance, if she followed one spell she would need to get hold of some big toe nail clippings from Mr. Philpots and a loch of hair from Miss. Vile. That didn’t sound very easy. For another spell, she need some mandrake’s root from the magic grocery shop, and mandrake’s root was very expensive. And then she found a spell that just required pictures of the two people who were to fall in love, and that was easy because she had a photograph of the whole school from the end of summer term. It was a shame that she had to cut it up with a pair of scissors, but it was in a good cause.

On February the 14th, which as everyone knows is Valentine’s day, Miss. Vile came into class looking quite different. Isis said afterward that she looked like she was lightly tripping on air.

When they saw her, Katie and Isis both felt sure that she had found a box of chocolates, a bunch of red roses and a card next to her locker in the staff room.

“Miss Vile. I’m really sorry, but I didn’t have time to do my home work last night.”

The whole class went silent and you could have heard a drawing pin drop. But Miss Vile said,

“Never mind Katie. It wasn’t very important anyway.”

And every one gasped.

And then Katie said:

“Actually, I was just joking. I did do it really !”

And Miss. Vile smiled and said. “Ah yes, that’s a funny joke. You got me there.”

And everyone was totally amazed. I mean like gobsmacked. And Katie smiled to herself. She knew that her spell had worked.

But what Katie didn’t know was that Miss. Vile had not just received one box of chocolates, and one bunch of flowers that morning. No. She had received two of each ! And two Valentine’s Day cards. No wonder she was in such a good mood.

That evening, Isis and her mum were out shopping in town, and Isis saw Potty and Miss. Vile standing outside a restaurant window and looking at the menu. And Isis said to her mum:

“Look ! How romantic ! Our teachers are going out for a candle-lit dinner on St. Valentine’s day !”

And her mum thought that Isis was getting very grown up to make a remark like that.

But what neither of them could hear what Mr. Philpots was saying to Miss. Vile. His words were.

“My oh my. Just look at the price of steak and chips at this place. Let’s find somewhere cheaper.”

But because Miss. Vile was in love, she didn’t think that her dear Potty was stingy. No, she thought how clever he was to be careful money, and what a good husband he would make.

For the rest of term, Miss. Vile was a sweet as could be, but when the children came back for the summer term, they were in for a big disappointment.

Her first words were:

“The first person who so much as whispers will be picking up litter after school for the rest of term.”

And Katie and Isis both knew that she Miss. Vile must have fallen out of love.

Katie was disappointed because it seemed that her spell had not worked entirely as it was supposed to. And so she asked her mother whether the love spell using pictures was any good. She was careful to explain that it wasn’t for her, but for somebody else. And her mother said:

“Love spells work, but only for a while. It’s only True Love that lasts for ever, not magic love. True Love must come from the heart.”

And when Katie heard that, she understood that it wasn’t her fault that the spell hadn’t lasted. And when she told Isis about this they both felt a bit down. But at least they only had one more term with Miss Vile – and after the summer holidays they would have a new form teacher.

And Miss Vile was her old grumpy moody self for the next five weeks. But when after the half term holiday, everyone had a pleasant surprise. She was back to being lovely and carefree.

“Katie, did you put another spell on her?” asked Isis.  But Katie hadn’t.  No what had happened was that Mr. Cotton had worked up the courage to ask Miss. Vile to go to the opera with him.   Mr.  Cotton had two nicknames.  One was ” Socks” as in “cotton socks” and the other was “Mr. Rotten.”  But the second name was unfair, but because Mr. Cotton was the sweetest and kindest teacher in the whole school.  And now Mr. Cotton and Miss Vile had found their  True Love.

Text Copyright Hugh Fraser 2009.

Stories in this series.

  1. The Witch Who Was Frightened Of Halloween
  2. The Witch Who Got into Trouble at School
  3. The Nose That Ran Away
  4. The Valentine Witch
  5. The Witch Who Lost Her Spells
  6. The Wizard Who Stole Katie's Spells

101 Comments

  • Vlasta
    Posted February 2, 2009 at 8:33 pm | Permalink

    Dear Natasha. I very like your fairy tales. You are great storryteller. Thank you.

  • Lily
    Posted February 3, 2009 at 4:07 pm | Permalink

    It was only good

  • Yeh-Jun
    Posted February 4, 2009 at 12:23 am | Permalink

    Before – teacher is mean
    After – teacher is nice.

    Interesting story!
    Plus, Happy Valentine Day!

  • Posted February 4, 2009 at 9:37 am | Permalink

    Yeh-Jun, Many thanks, and Happy Valentine Day to you too !

  • Posted February 4, 2009 at 10:51 am | Permalink

    I liked this story,
    HAPPY VALENTINE’S DAY!!!

  • Azzy
    Posted February 4, 2009 at 3:40 pm | Permalink

    this is one of my favorite storys

  • Posted February 5, 2009 at 9:52 pm | Permalink

    i love that story HAPPY VALENTINE’S DAYS

    LOVE

  • anusha
    Posted February 7, 2009 at 5:14 am | Permalink

    loved the story. very romantic!!!!!

  • Tommy and Aimee
    Posted February 7, 2009 at 5:27 am | Permalink

    FUNNYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

  • Darlene
    Posted February 7, 2009 at 5:32 pm | Permalink

    I have too say it’s focus on magic spells is not good and having all the teachers seem well; unattractive in not only looks but in character does not set forth an encouraging note to those young students who read or hear this story. The story puts the focus on the negative aspects of live rather than the real positives and the simpler things. Such as having a teacher in the first place that checks your homewrok and hold students to a high standard is not mean but good for the students.

  • Posted February 7, 2009 at 6:54 pm | Permalink

    Dear Darlene – Thanks for some really good thoughts. You are right to point out that the teacher is demanding high standards – not just being mean as Katie sees her- perhaps we should have brought that out more in the story. But there is a point about the magic spell – it didn’t work because True Love can’t come from a spell.. ..So I don’t think it’s too pro-magic.

  • Posted February 9, 2009 at 6:37 pm | Permalink

    i like that story

  • Posted February 9, 2009 at 6:39 pm | Permalink

    it’s funny and good

  • Posted February 9, 2009 at 8:23 pm | Permalink

    true love comes from hart not a magic spell

  • Posted February 9, 2009 at 8:26 pm | Permalink

    i love valentines day

  • Ma. Elena
    Posted February 10, 2009 at 12:59 am | Permalink

    This website is AMAZING!!! I Love it. Thanks for making my job easier and more enjoyable!

  • Kendra and Kayla
    Posted February 10, 2009 at 2:45 am | Permalink

    We love this story! Thank you Natasha for telling this story! THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU! ( February 9, 2009)

  • meng
    Posted February 10, 2009 at 3:16 am | Permalink

    Katie is lively and creative.I like her.
    “The wall of Shame” is useless for kids like Katie.I wish teachers know that too.
    I’ve heard kids talking about their being born in the year of the Cat; they are just babbling their very heart, and it’s much fun to listen to.
    –Meng , from Beijing

  • Nils Gunnar
    Posted February 10, 2009 at 11:10 am | Permalink

    I love this story! It`s not scary at all!

  • Posted February 10, 2009 at 3:05 pm | Permalink

    Hi Meng From Beijing,

    I’m really glad that this story and its characters ring true for you ! Thanks for your comment

    And thanks to everyone who likes the Valentine Witch

  • Anonymous
    Posted February 10, 2009 at 4:54 pm | Permalink

    brill

  • Posted February 10, 2009 at 11:07 pm | Permalink

    I rilly like the store THE VALENTINE WITCH because it is rilly good.

  • Posted February 11, 2009 at 10:58 am | Permalink

    Hey! You guys that i could click the name are just coping me. Try to click my name and it will really go to my site. Why kamena, sasher, alexandra and MADISON are coping me? I clicked their names and nothing worked! They invented that website! They don’t have one!

  • dw
    Posted February 11, 2009 at 2:47 pm | Permalink

    it not that good

  • Posted February 11, 2009 at 2:53 pm | Permalink

    Hey you guys this is a nice story and i just wanted to say that it is a very cool story

  • carrie
    Posted February 11, 2009 at 2:55 pm | Permalink

    hey i like this story

  • Phoebe
    Posted February 12, 2009 at 9:42 am | Permalink

    It was sooooooooooooo mushy-gushy!!!!

    Oh, reply to this Bertie!!

    Love
    Phoebe

  • Michelle
    Posted February 12, 2009 at 9:45 am | Permalink

    *** Answer me Bertie***

    I luv the story. I think you should put more pictures in it. Why put only one??? ^^

    Loyal fan
    Michelle

  • Posted February 12, 2009 at 10:13 am | Permalink

    Hi Michelle, Sorry we don’t have more pictures for this story, but I would be really interested to know what you think of these pictures for Bertie Valentine

    http://storynory.com/2007/02/11/valentines_day_story/

  • Posted February 13, 2009 at 11:21 am | Permalink

    I love story with magic powers.

  • libby
    Posted February 13, 2009 at 9:57 pm | Permalink

    I really enjoyed this story i thought it was fun.

  • manthan
    Posted February 14, 2009 at 2:26 am | Permalink

    Nice story. i like it.

  • Isha
    Posted February 14, 2009 at 2:27 am | Permalink

    Thanks for the story.
    wish you all happy velentine day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • EmoPunk.......Saru
    Posted February 14, 2009 at 9:29 am | Permalink

    hummmmmm……..i think it was fine i wold say if it would b perfect for some1 who loves each other…….. but i m sure tey would enjoy it i think it was fine cuz i don’t luv any1…….

  • EmoPunk.......Saru
    Posted February 14, 2009 at 9:29 am | Permalink

    actually any horrror one

  • Dhruv
    Posted February 15, 2009 at 5:45 am | Permalink

    i Needed it for making my audiobook nd i think i’ll base my audio on it. thanks.

  • janine
    Posted February 15, 2009 at 8:50 pm | Permalink

    i love the story

  • Posted February 17, 2009 at 6:42 pm | Permalink

    i love this great story

  • zoha
    Posted February 17, 2009 at 6:48 pm | Permalink

    The story was romantic and gloomy KATIE was my FAVOURITE character in the story and so was miss vile

  • zoha
    Posted February 17, 2009 at 6:51 pm | Permalink

    It was so superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrb it was realy funnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnny

  • Posted February 18, 2009 at 10:14 pm | Permalink

    Bertie I just don’t like you

    and I don’t love you

    but in fact I dream of you!!!

  • Posted February 18, 2009 at 10:15 pm | Permalink

    bertie do you like St.Valentines Day?!

  • Posted February 18, 2009 at 10:21 pm | Permalink

    Answer me Bertie!!!

    how about put more St.Valentines Day stories?

    Ha Ha Ha!!!!!!!!!!

  • Posted February 19, 2009 at 6:46 am | Permalink

    Dear Angie, We’ll have another Valentine Story next year. Now we are thinking about what to do for Easter.

  • Posted February 19, 2009 at 6:47 am | Permalink

    Yes of course, I especially think about the Lovely Princess Beatrice on Valentine’s Day

  • kayla
    Posted February 19, 2009 at 6:51 pm | Permalink

    super good

  • ashlynnne
    Posted February 19, 2009 at 6:51 pm | Permalink

    it was very very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • giselle
    Posted February 21, 2009 at 5:05 am | Permalink

    it is the bestttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt

  • giselle
    Posted February 21, 2009 at 5:14 am | Permalink

    betie do you know that you know that I saw princess Beatrice in my garden

  • giselle
    Posted February 21, 2009 at 5:23 am | Permalink

    plus happy valentine day bertie

  • Posted February 21, 2009 at 10:11 am | Permalink

    Hi Giselle, if you see her again tell her to come down to the pond and look for the green frog

  • Sasha
    Posted February 22, 2009 at 5:42 pm | Permalink

    Bertie I love you

  • Posted February 22, 2009 at 7:20 pm | Permalink

    Thank you Sasha, that’s very kind of you to say so.

  • trika
    Posted February 23, 2009 at 6:46 am | Permalink

    Bertie, I love you soooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • trika
    Posted February 23, 2009 at 6:52 am | Permalink

    I hope you meet Princess Beatrice soon!!!!!!!

  • Anonymous
    Posted February 27, 2009 at 1:29 am | Permalink

    I hope you meet Princess Beatrice soon Too !!!!!!

  • iris
    Posted March 5, 2009 at 12:11 pm | Permalink

    I am form China too。I am very sad that i can not understand very well.but I am glad to find those stories.it very helpful for me to improve my listerning,thanks a lot!
    my e-mail:272516924@163.com

  • jocelyn
    Posted March 6, 2009 at 10:09 am | Permalink

    how a wonderful story
    and i am a 3 grade student
    in Taiwan

  • Posted April 5, 2009 at 8:59 am | Permalink

    THis gotta be the best story I ever heard!

  • Julia
    Posted April 21, 2009 at 2:06 pm | Permalink

    Really great!!! Enjoyed listening!!!

  • MEG
    Posted May 15, 2009 at 3:57 am | Permalink

    i love this story

  • Posted May 25, 2009 at 2:37 pm | Permalink

    so sweet the stories about katie are the best

  • giselle
    Posted June 10, 2009 at 7:05 am | Permalink

    i told her to BUTshe said that She will come

  • giselle
    Posted June 10, 2009 at 7:08 am | Permalink

    please replyto me Betie ASAP

  • Posted June 10, 2009 at 7:31 am | Permalink

    Giselle, Many thanks for listening to the stories – glad you like the Valentine Witch.

  • kevin
    Posted June 19, 2009 at 4:32 pm | Permalink

    hope good luck on valentines day

    and tell colin to be nice or ill come and tell him my self tell p.s. me where you live bertie

  • kevin
    Posted June 19, 2009 at 4:33 pm | Permalink

    i have a question bertie how old are you

  • Posted June 19, 2009 at 5:33 pm | Permalink

    Kevin that depends on the story !

  • eleanor
    Posted June 21, 2009 at 1:50 pm | Permalink

    i like this story i dont normally like valentimes storys it is just the way natasha reads it thank you
    i lov your website!!!!

  • shania
    Posted June 27, 2009 at 3:18 am | Permalink

    so cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooollll

  • Flora
    Posted July 30, 2009 at 4:36 am | Permalink

    When is the new Katie story?? I NEED to know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Posted July 30, 2009 at 1:49 pm | Permalink

    Flora, the new katie will be either this coming weekend or the one after, not quite decided yet.

  • Posted August 7, 2009 at 5:45 pm | Permalink

    Why does it say this?
    Katie is a mother who is just a little bit different from the other kids at school.
    Hannah~

  • Posted August 8, 2009 at 7:28 am | Permalink

    Dear Hannah, Well spotted ! Thank you. That was an old slip that seemed to have crept back into the system unnoticed somehow. I’ve changed it. Let me know if you spot any other silly mistakes. Thanks again.

  • stephanie
    Posted August 12, 2009 at 2:24 pm | Permalink

    i am not saying its mean but its not good to cast spell on people

  • heart
    Posted August 13, 2009 at 6:58 pm | Permalink

    i love it

  • Posted September 1, 2009 at 12:55 am | Permalink

    This story is great.

  • Posted September 16, 2009 at 10:31 pm | Permalink

    loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee is coollllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll.

  • Firoza
    Posted September 24, 2009 at 4:32 pm | Permalink

    wonderful loveeeeeeeeeeeee
    storyyyyyyyyyyy

  • cindy
    Posted September 29, 2009 at 11:21 am | Permalink

    lt a fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • thomas
    Posted September 30, 2009 at 12:17 am | Permalink

    you are verry good at reading.

  • atif
    Posted October 13, 2009 at 10:41 am | Permalink

    coooooooooooooooooooool

  • alyssa meyer
    Posted November 19, 2009 at 4:12 am | Permalink

    i love all the no odriy witch
    stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Abby
    Posted December 15, 2009 at 8:02 pm | Permalink

    I loooooooooooooooooove your story.

  • Cattien
    Posted December 23, 2009 at 1:03 am | Permalink

    Ms.Vile is Ms. Evil.The reason for this is because evil has e,v,i,and l just like vile.

  • Honey Girl
    Posted December 23, 2009 at 8:47 pm | Permalink

    Fab do more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Sweetie Pie
    Posted December 23, 2009 at 8:52 pm | Permalink

    IT IS FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Juliea(박승언)
    Posted December 26, 2009 at 6:12 am | Permalink

    Wow!!!!!!!!!!IT’S GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I love this story

  • Amelia
    Posted January 9, 2010 at 9:39 am | Permalink

    very good! I love listening to the story

    thank-you!

  • Rowell
    Posted January 23, 2010 at 9:03 am | Permalink

    so great!!!! I’ll listen this story everyday

  • Rowell
    Posted January 23, 2010 at 9:16 am | Permalink

    can i take this story to my blog?

  • Posted January 23, 2010 at 9:37 am | Permalink

    Hi Rowell, You can link to this story – of course please – or even embed the audio link in your blog if you know how. Thanks.

  • bertie 912
    Posted February 7, 2010 at 3:15 am | Permalink

    bad story
    and bertie make your answer long

  • Xenia
    Posted February 11, 2010 at 6:25 pm | Permalink

    Valentine storys are always so nice. The mother of Katie is wise: true love comes from the heart! And funny nicknames, perhaps my teachers nickname would be: friendly Henry?! :-) And the end was nice too, a happy end!

  • elodie.D
    Posted February 11, 2010 at 8:24 pm | Permalink

    I have not read everything
    but it is really good
    I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • my Casper
    Posted February 18, 2010 at 2:12 pm | Permalink

    that´s a pretty good story but why can´t my teacher be so sweet that´s unfair. But I don´t care. It doesn´t matter anyway he´s already quite nice.

  • Ibrahed
    Posted February 18, 2010 at 10:22 pm | Permalink

    I love this story.

  • Posted February 25, 2010 at 3:21 pm | Permalink

    hi story teller lve ur stories keep diong it

    p.s make more storys

  • Posted March 8, 2010 at 5:46 pm | Permalink

    i liked it

  • Posted March 8, 2010 at 5:48 pm | Permalink

    i loved it so much and you a good writter

  • Posted March 8, 2010 at 5:49 pm | Permalink

    it was a great story but it was a little long i liked the part katie looked in the book and was looking for the letter l for love

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