Comments on: The Merman and the Mermaid http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/ Audio Stories Wed, 08 Feb 2012 17:15:24 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3 By: 250880110002228287 http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-62825 250880110002228287 Mon, 05 Dec 2011 19:45:12 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-62825 That was AMAZING!!! I loved it Thanks for shareing! That was AMAZING!!! I loved it
Thanks for shareing!

]]> By: Natasha http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-52949 Natasha Mon, 11 Apr 2011 15:40:42 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-52949 Dear Anna and friends, thank you for your comments, this is a wonderful poem in the dialogue between the Merman and the Mermaid, in its two verse stanzas. And full of beautiful descriptive imagery of the sea and the character actions like the 'mermaid combing her hair'. There is also' The Revenge,' by the same poet, Alfred Lord Tennyson, a recent audio on Storynory. It is a longer poem and an Epic poem of narrative verse, with a true historical account of the story running through it. Why not give this a listen too Bye bye N* Dear Anna and friends,

thank you for your comments, this is a wonderful poem in the dialogue between the Merman and the Mermaid, in its two verse stanzas. And full of beautiful descriptive imagery of the sea and the character actions like the ‘mermaid combing her hair’.

There is also’ The Revenge,’ by the same poet, Alfred Lord Tennyson, a recent audio on Storynory. It is a longer poem and an Epic poem of narrative verse, with a true historical account of the story running through it.

Why not give this a listen too
Bye bye
N*

]]> By: Alexis http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-52079 Alexis Wed, 23 Mar 2011 16:07:13 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-52079 THIS IS THE BEST PEMO I EVER READ. I LOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEE IT THIS IS THE BEST PEMO I EVER READ. I LOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEE IT

]]> By: alisha http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-51988 alisha Mon, 21 Mar 2011 16:25:25 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-51988 hey i like it gmv hey i like it
gmv

]]> By: Dilly Tate http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-51400 Dilly Tate Thu, 10 Mar 2011 09:06:15 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-51400 Sorry about the old one, somebody took hold of my computer! Sorry about the old one, somebody took hold of my computer!

]]> By: Dilly Tate http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-51399 Dilly Tate Thu, 10 Mar 2011 09:05:31 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-51399 a bit boring............................ a bit boring……………………….

]]> By: Jenny http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-51057 Jenny Fri, 04 Mar 2011 13:54:58 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-51057 I love mermaids! The poem was very beautiful and merry and also full of mystery. If I was a mermaid, I would do the things exactly like the plot of the poem.A great poem!^^* I love mermaids! The poem was very beautiful and merry and also full of mystery.
If I was a mermaid, I would do the things exactly like the plot of the poem.A great poem!^^*

]]> By: brazae http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-48518 brazae Fri, 28 Jan 2011 14:26:48 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-48518 that was a great story and my sisster said iloved this story and im very for natashia that was a great story and my sisster said iloved this story and im very for natashia

]]> By: Lucy http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-45030 Lucy Tue, 16 Nov 2010 12:24:19 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-45030 Beautiful! There once was a boy name Chilk he loved to drink cow milk one day he went to a store with cow milk and more and there he bought some silk Like my poem Natasha? Beautiful!
There once was a boy name Chilk
he loved to drink cow milk
one day he went to a store
with cow milk and more
and there he bought some silk

Like my poem Natasha?

]]> By: Bee http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-44912 Bee Sun, 14 Nov 2010 01:54:11 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-44912 Please create a story series about a girl who moved to a city next to a beach and is rescued by three teenage mermaids after she started drowning. Then her parents die and would be adopted by the mermaids and the girl's life with the mermaids. you can name her anything you want, Bertie. Please create a story series about a girl who moved to a city next to a beach and is rescued by three teenage mermaids after she started drowning. Then her parents die and would be adopted by the mermaids and the girl’s life with the mermaids. you can name her anything you want, Bertie.

]]> By: alex http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-43710 alex Tue, 19 Oct 2010 18:51:30 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-43710 beatiful poem!don't you think? beatiful poem!don’t you think?

]]> By: anna http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-42658 anna Tue, 28 Sep 2010 12:15:42 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-42658 It was good. It was good.

]]> By: Bee http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-42391 Bee Tue, 21 Sep 2010 21:38:44 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-42391 AWESOME! AWESOME!

]]> By: Sally http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-42069 Sally Tue, 14 Sep 2010 06:27:28 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-42069 good good

]]> By: Sally http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-42068 Sally Tue, 14 Sep 2010 06:25:05 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-42068 Dear Natasha, can you think of a idear that i can be a Mermaid? JUST KIDDING! i wish that i can be a Lovely Mermaid!!! bye bye!! Dear Natasha,
can you think of a idear that i can be a Mermaid?
JUST KIDDING!
i wish that i can be a Lovely Mermaid!!!
bye bye!!

]]> By: Serane http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-41996 Serane Mon, 13 Sep 2010 02:07:42 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-41996 I thought it was ok not very great I thought it was ok not very great

]]> By: chrysostom http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-41822 chrysostom Tue, 07 Sep 2010 12:15:24 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-41822 Remember we are human and every one have free will and free choice. Remember we are human and every one have free will and free choice.

]]> By: Bertie http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-41820 Bertie Tue, 07 Sep 2010 11:08:00 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-41820 Dear Sarah It looks like we might have to wait until October for Katie. We are going to be recording two stories soon, I hope, but they tie into something that's happening a a little later. Apologies. Hugh Dear Sarah It looks like we might have to wait until October for Katie. We are going to be recording two stories soon, I hope, but they tie into something that’s happening a a little later. Apologies. Hugh

]]> By: sarah http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-41819 sarah Tue, 07 Sep 2010 11:04:33 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-41819 i dont really like the love and kissing poems but this one was ok except for the love part. When will you submit the katie stories? plz answer. i dont really like the love and kissing poems but this one was ok except for the love part.
When will you submit the katie stories?
plz answer.

]]> By: mahendra http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-41699 mahendra Fri, 03 Sep 2010 12:59:49 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-41699 cooooooool except for [the love part] cooooooool except for [the love part]

]]> By: little cat http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-41427 little cat Fri, 27 Aug 2010 00:52:46 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-41427 My Beloved, let us love for love is ever sweet and young. My Beloved, let us love for love is light and eternal. My Beloved, let us love
for love is ever sweet and young.
My Beloved, let us love
for love is light and eternal.

]]> By: Wenht http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-40164 Wenht Mon, 19 Jul 2010 04:25:39 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-40164 ...THIZ IZ A AWESOM POEM! (except for the LOVE part) …THIZ IZ A AWESOM POEM!
(except for the LOVE part)

]]> By: Natsha http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-40001 Natsha Tue, 13 Jul 2010 17:06:47 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-40001 [I love it.] It is ssssssssssoooooooooo ROMANTIC. [I love it.] It is ssssssssssoooooooooo ROMANTIC.

]]> By: Natsha http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-40000 Natsha Tue, 13 Jul 2010 17:04:48 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-40000 [ Ilove it.]It is ssssssssssoooooooooo ROMANTIC**********. [ Ilove it.]It is ssssssssssoooooooooo ROMANTIC**********.

]]> By: fatima http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-38341 fatima Fri, 11 Jun 2010 07:36:57 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-38341 Ilove to be a mermaid.Because ican stay in the water as much as i want HaaaaaaHaaaaaa Ilove to be a mermaid.Because ican stay in the water as much as i want HaaaaaaHaaaaaa

]]> By: MATTHEW http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-37584 MATTHEW Wed, 19 May 2010 19:07:46 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-37584 SO COOL! SO COOL!

]]> By: Yuu http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-35810 Yuu Sun, 21 Mar 2010 10:52:46 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-35810 I love it ! I love it !

]]> By: hannah http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-34570 hannah Fri, 12 Feb 2010 06:49:43 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-34570 that story was amazing! that story was amazing!

]]> By: Bertie http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-29357 Bertie Mon, 05 Oct 2009 16:26:39 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-29357 Ashley, Tennyson is or was, a poet, who lived in the 1900s. Ashley, Tennyson is or was, a poet, who lived in the 1900s.

]]> By: Ashley http://storynory.com/2009/03/17/the-merman-and-the-mermaid/#comment-29335 Ashley Sun, 04 Oct 2009 22:20:39 +0000 http://storynory.com/?p=1497#comment-29335 What's Tennyson? What’s Tennyson?

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